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3/10/2018 c1 Rarity
...I like where this is going!
9/6/2008 c1 1silver0scorpion
wow that was strong

5/5
9/1/2008 c1 5ChibiLady
Wow really good can you make a sequel? It's actually very good.
4/8/2008 c1 Autumnights
Well that was a unique way of writing. I liked it alot. I wish there was more but its kinda perfect just as it is. Very well done.
1/9/2008 c1 13DarkFoxPriestess
Liked it! Total awesomeness! You should check out something I just posted it's called 'Dark Poetry'. I made this whole story/poetry thing and it's Kurama and Karasu talking back and forth, but it's not specific so you have to figure out who's saying what! I really think you would like it since you write this kind of stuff.
12/31/2007 c1 3Mischieff-Maker
greta story! ah . . .karasu, the craziest of them all, but still. . . .
12/15/2007 c1 151CanaanAlshea
So good it gave me chills!
12/4/2007 c1 4TheUnknownAuthoress
Clever. I kind of like the way you wrote it so it seems we're listening to first one side of the conversation, then the other. You kept us guessing about the characters, too. When I first started reading, I thought it was Kurama speaking to someone he'd captured. Most likely Hiei. Then I thought maybe Hiei had locked 'his' fox away for safekeeping. I never would have guessed it was Karasu, because of the lack of violence, torture, etc. I see now what you meant in a forum discussion you had about the way people characterize him. He almost seems more scary your way than as the cackling, sadistic, bomb-lobbing psychopath. I'll try my best to follow your example if I ever get up the nerve to write something besides my little fluffy oneshots. That'll take quite a while though, so don't hold your breath or anything. Later!
12/1/2007 c1 2Icedragon316
Dude. Nice structure.
11/29/2007 c1 10LeFoxy
This is awesome.,! Very great point of view.

Le-chan
11/28/2007 c1 111ladyasile
wow, so dark. i did love the contrasting between these two. both of their pov's made the aspect of fear and neccesity come out better. great job!

:-)
11/28/2007 c1 Lynette
Dude...niffty!
11/28/2007 c1 morsmordre
I like this. Your Karasu, in particular, is very convincing. And the style you used works well.
11/28/2007 c1 19Sora Sotara
Well, that was strange but I guess I can't complain with some of my work and that you're one of the only authors I've seen post anything in about a week. I do think you might have missed a line on Kurama's part though, they don't seem to line up quite right when you read them together...

Other than that, all in all, interesting story. Points for you.^^
11/28/2007 c1 5Chaseha-Wing
Dang it, Karasu needs to work on how to love still...
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