
11/4/2012 c10 Diana
Great story! Please finsh it.
Idea:
Inuyasha and Kagome escape when Kagome finds out she's pregnant (or move far away with Sango and Mirooku secretly following them.) and until baby is born? Just a carzy idea
Great story! Please finsh it.
Idea:
Inuyasha and Kagome escape when Kagome finds out she's pregnant (or move far away with Sango and Mirooku secretly following them.) and until baby is born? Just a carzy idea
5/4/2012 c10
9Ihatethesystem
I'm going to be honest with you. It's a great idea and it has potential, but you have more grammatical and spelling errors than I can count. It gets hard to follow along as well so you should fix that.
I think with some editing and a few more tweaks, you could have a fantastic story.
-IHTS

I'm going to be honest with you. It's a great idea and it has potential, but you have more grammatical and spelling errors than I can count. It gets hard to follow along as well so you should fix that.
I think with some editing and a few more tweaks, you could have a fantastic story.
-IHTS
1/25/2011 c10 alicealicealicealice
It contains A LOT of dramatic events, no doubt. You can work on your grammar and spelling though. But overall, nice work! I hope it continues xD
It contains A LOT of dramatic events, no doubt. You can work on your grammar and spelling though. But overall, nice work! I hope it continues xD
1/27/2009 c10
22anime-patriot
Yay you finally updated! Woot~. Lol, anyway, I loved the chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you update as soon as you can. =] Great story so far 5/5!

Yay you finally updated! Woot~. Lol, anyway, I loved the chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you update as soon as you can. =] Great story so far 5/5!
1/26/2009 c10 AngelFire85
I think you should continue
It's a real good story
Basically Kagome is gonna have to leave Hojo just no getting around it
Cause if she stays and has a kid wit InuYasha's eyes well how do you explain that?
But keep going
I think you should continue
It's a real good story
Basically Kagome is gonna have to leave Hojo just no getting around it
Cause if she stays and has a kid wit InuYasha's eyes well how do you explain that?
But keep going