for A Storm Hawks Story4/24/2008 c12 hmavailability
Not bad. I like it. Just a little OOC and marysueish.
Not bad. I like it. Just a little OOC and marysueish.
12/29/2007 c1 cinderpool-my email is crashin
Hmm seems good so far. Though I only read chap1. I might suggest
after every line you press enter twice. It makes it easier for
the reader to read!
Hmm seems good so far. Though I only read chap1. I might suggest
after every line you press enter twice. It makes it easier for
the reader to read!
12/1/2007 c1 
4Dookie Overlord
I want to read it but I can't get over those annoying black box things. Please repost this.
4Dookie OverlordI want to read it but I can't get over those annoying black box things. Please repost this.