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for A Storm Hawks Story

4/24/2008 c12 hmavailability
Not bad. I like it. Just a little OOC and marysueish.
12/29/2007 c1 cinderpool-my email is crashin
Hmm seems good so far. Though I only read chap1. I might suggest



after every line you press enter twice. It makes it easier for

the reader to read!
12/2/2007 c1 3Nutbrain
The evil little black boxes are now gone! Yay!
12/1/2007 c1 4Dookie Overlord
I want to read it but I can't get over those annoying black box things. Please repost this.
11/30/2007 c8 SnowStorm75
lol. I do enjoy this story. Please update soon. ^-^
11/29/2007 c8 1zx319
This story is actually quite good and intresting! Well done!Please continue! The only con is could you plz remove those black block of lines

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