3/1/2008 c2 shaina
It was brilliant. I like lemon, but it is good to see a lemon also acompained by some story, not only the scene. I believe the characters are very well developed. Also I am not English speaking (you see, I am Spanish) but I really think your English is very good there are some word I even don't understand.
ENHORABUENA, ME HA ENCANTADO TU HISTORIA. (hope you understand, it takes after Italian).
It was brilliant. I like lemon, but it is good to see a lemon also acompained by some story, not only the scene. I believe the characters are very well developed. Also I am not English speaking (you see, I am Spanish) but I really think your English is very good there are some word I even don't understand.
ENHORABUENA, ME HA ENCANTADO TU HISTORIA. (hope you understand, it takes after Italian).
2/29/2008 c2 14nicthepunk
You said your Italian-American? Beautiful work. I loved the whole plot of this story. I've been getting so tired of reading confusing stories with bad grammar and bad spelling lol. This story was perfect. Great job!
You said your Italian-American? Beautiful work. I loved the whole plot of this story. I've been getting so tired of reading confusing stories with bad grammar and bad spelling lol. This story was perfect. Great job!
2/27/2008 c2 rallybabe89
very nice. ah a jealous sasuke = fun for sakura.lol
very nice. ah a jealous sasuke = fun for sakura.lol
2/13/2008 c2 5yungneko
Ohmygosh wow!
That was one of the best SasuSakus I've read in a very long time. :D
It's so balanced between hot and sweet and funny and cute and you managed to keep them all in character, it's wonderful!
I like how you incorporated all of the Japanese traditions and the festival into this. It made for really beautiful imagery.
That was awesome. You have to write more!
Ohmygosh wow!
That was one of the best SasuSakus I've read in a very long time. :D
It's so balanced between hot and sweet and funny and cute and you managed to keep them all in character, it's wonderful!
I like how you incorporated all of the Japanese traditions and the festival into this. It made for really beautiful imagery.
That was awesome. You have to write more!
2/7/2008 c2 2Blue Blood4686
Hehehe... I LOVE IT! You really know how to write a story... Please write ALOT more.
Hehehe... I LOVE IT! You really know how to write a story... Please write ALOT more.
2/7/2008 c2 5Autumn's Wind
Cool...this story got me thinking of the Uchiha family (Sasuke, Sakura and babies:) )
Cool...this story got me thinking of the Uchiha family (Sasuke, Sakura and babies:) )
2/3/2008 c1 Haruko
This story is really good so far. And I dont think you really needed to give that warning, for lack of a better word, that you are Italian and that English is not your first language. Your writting is better that many people who do speak english as their first language. There were very few mistakes but i believe that those could easily be fized. Your story was very fun to read and very creative. I really like it. Good job and keep up the good work!
This story is really good so far. And I dont think you really needed to give that warning, for lack of a better word, that you are Italian and that English is not your first language. Your writting is better that many people who do speak english as their first language. There were very few mistakes but i believe that those could easily be fized. Your story was very fun to read and very creative. I really like it. Good job and keep up the good work!
2/3/2008 c2 6red.masenko
THAT WAS AWSOME! Man, i dont even know what to say. it was just great! and the last sentence. ahahaha. funny.
great story! really.
=D
THAT WAS AWSOME! Man, i dont even know what to say. it was just great! and the last sentence. ahahaha. funny.
great story! really.
=D
2/3/2008 c1 red.masenko
that was really really good. and ezpecially that english isnt your first language. awsome!
but one thing, i dont think that kakashi-sempai thinks about sakura as his little sister. i think its more of a father/daughter kind of relationship. or atleast, will be.
but that was great!
^^
that was really really good. and ezpecially that english isnt your first language. awsome!
but one thing, i dont think that kakashi-sempai thinks about sakura as his little sister. i think its more of a father/daughter kind of relationship. or atleast, will be.
but that was great!
^^
2/1/2008 c2 31violaqu33n
mineminemineminemine
sasukes one jealous bitch
this is really good, especially since english isn't your first language
no grammar mistakes, at least none that i saw
mineminemineminemine
sasukes one jealous bitch
this is really good, especially since english isn't your first language
no grammar mistakes, at least none that i saw