for Emmett's Little Secret5/16/2008 c4 gone11111
It seems like Emmett doesn't know much about Celia, but his love for her is very strong; that draws me into the story.
You have written a very nice story, and I'd love to keep reading this if you ever decide to update. No pressure, though. :)
Amazing job!
-Sara
It seems like Emmett doesn't know much about Celia, but his love for her is very strong; that draws me into the story.
You have written a very nice story, and I'd love to keep reading this if you ever decide to update. No pressure, though. :)
Amazing job!
-Sara
5/16/2008 c3 gone11111
Your writing isn't crap; it's really good! You have a unique writing style, though the plot is a little shaky (I have problems with making plot-lines flow, so please don't take offense).
I feel bad for Rosalie, but I'm glad Emmett is happy. He's such a warm character. And then Bella is truly compassionate. She is basically drowning in the mendacity of Edward not loving her; she doesn't think she was ever worthy of Edward. The fact that she's trying to make Charlie feel better is really caring.
Great job!
-Sara
Your writing isn't crap; it's really good! You have a unique writing style, though the plot is a little shaky (I have problems with making plot-lines flow, so please don't take offense).
I feel bad for Rosalie, but I'm glad Emmett is happy. He's such a warm character. And then Bella is truly compassionate. She is basically drowning in the mendacity of Edward not loving her; she doesn't think she was ever worthy of Edward. The fact that she's trying to make Charlie feel better is really caring.
Great job!
-Sara
5/16/2008 c1 gone11111
Wow! I think you've got a great story going here. I'm not too shocked that Emmett is falling for another woman (though he's one of my favorite characters). After all, vampires have very strong emotions. I'm suprised that your story hasn't been reviewed much; it's very well written. Great job!
-Sara
Wow! I think you've got a great story going here. I'm not too shocked that Emmett is falling for another woman (though he's one of my favorite characters). After all, vampires have very strong emotions. I'm suprised that your story hasn't been reviewed much; it's very well written. Great job!
-Sara
12/5/2007 c2 anon321654987
oh gosh this is absolutely terrible. Most boring thing ever.
NAH JOKES JOKES!
its really good.
really descriptive and stuff.
hope Bella has a happy ending (one with Edward in it . . .)
kinda hoping Rosalie goes ape-skat and fights with Cessy.
anyway
cyu tomorrow!
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oh gosh this is absolutely terrible. Most boring thing ever.
NAH JOKES JOKES!
its really good.
really descriptive and stuff.
hope Bella has a happy ending (one with Edward in it . . .)
kinda hoping Rosalie goes ape-skat and fights with Cessy.
anyway
cyu tomorrow!
`shortyy