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5/5/2014 c1 Blah
Your spelling and grammar are painful. Do you seriously not have spellcheck? I couldn't even finish this thing. It a good thing that it wasn't for a class cause it would have been given a failing grade. I mean wow, that was real bad.
11/17/2012 c1 10Genesis Noir Gracely
:O bahahaha I love it! kisame is sexy ;)
3/18/2012 c1 1SlytherinInToxicKat
aww poor Kisame, he ate a fish cookie :D

lol i loved this story!
6/16/2011 c1 Salleh
I liked it.. DOOM COOKIES:)3
4/1/2011 c1 6KaKashi's Okami
For all the bad grammar it's still really funny.
12/11/2010 c1 3Haku13
teehee, that made me giggle at the end...fish cookies...LOL, you'd think Kisame, being Mr.Sharky, would LIKE them...hmm.

the only problem was the multiple typos, try using beta or having an official editor, or just rereading it^^
5/24/2009 c1 9Nightmother
Fish cookies? oh poor kisame.
3/2/2008 c1 1Nightmare2Day
LOL Kisame is a canibal... XD Poor Kisame
1/26/2008 c1 kunahanipikachu
Um... this story could actually be good if you do a couple of things:

1) Run a spell check or get someone to proof read it for you. Your spelling and grammar is appalling and it ruins the story.

2) Try to keep it in character or at least warn people its an ooc fic.

I think that's it. It's okay for a first try. Next time, just show it to your friends at school before you drop it on the internet.
12/16/2007 c1 7Gaarazlilmiss
pretty good.
12/4/2007 c1 7Mokana-chan
Interesting. Well I would love to have someone like him stalking me *eyes glance over to window* But alas it would never happen.
12/4/2007 c1 1Saya522
HAHAHAH!

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