for Christmas Guests and Troubles1/5/2008 c3 
10Splint
Great chapter.
Not much going on but the dynamic between the characters is pretty interesting.
A race between Kid Flash and the Twins...in all honesty that's nothing too new for me since that was a plot already used in an issue of the Titans Go! comic book (I do recall that you said somewhere you don't read the comics)
Just so you know, the twins won in that race. Not because they were faster, but because KF spent too much time showboating and flirting with Raven and Argent (which ticked off Jinx)
Well, anyway, I still want to know how you would do a race between KF and M&M. hope you update soon.
10SplintGreat chapter.
Not much going on but the dynamic between the characters is pretty interesting.
A race between Kid Flash and the Twins...in all honesty that's nothing too new for me since that was a plot already used in an issue of the Titans Go! comic book (I do recall that you said somewhere you don't read the comics)
Just so you know, the twins won in that race. Not because they were faster, but because KF spent too much time showboating and flirting with Raven and Argent (which ticked off Jinx)
Well, anyway, I still want to know how you would do a race between KF and M&M. hope you update soon.
1/3/2008 c3 10StarWonder09
Oh this should be interesting. A race between Kid Flash and Mas Y Menos.
I do hope you continue even though Christmas has passed. I hope to not have to wait a year for an update. Although, I'm one to talk. (I should update these next few days. Writers block is a terrible enemy!)
I enjoyed the chapter!
10StarWonder09Oh this should be interesting. A race between Kid Flash and Mas Y Menos.
I do hope you continue even though Christmas has passed. I hope to not have to wait a year for an update. Although, I'm one to talk. (I should update these next few days. Writers block is a terrible enemy!)
I enjoyed the chapter!
12/17/2007 c3 23ThSamurai
A race between Kid Flash and Mas Y Menos, hm. This could lend itself to something explosive. I hope its a long course, cause they might finish it before Starfire finishes saying "Go".
Now as for suggestions on games and contests, well, I do have a few;
First you could have some weithlifting between Cyborg and Thunder. Then to everyone's astonishment Starfire walks in and says she'd like to particapate.
Next you could pit Raven against Jinx in some kind of battle of wits. Azarathian v/s Socceress.
And then my last one (probably not all that great), is a classic game of "Chase me" between Robin and Starfire. You could make to where Robin has to catch her before a certain time or something.
Well those are my suggestions, use them in what ever way you choose. And I promise the next time you update I won't be this late. Laters!
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23ThSamuraiA race between Kid Flash and Mas Y Menos, hm. This could lend itself to something explosive. I hope its a long course, cause they might finish it before Starfire finishes saying "Go".
Now as for suggestions on games and contests, well, I do have a few;
First you could have some weithlifting between Cyborg and Thunder. Then to everyone's astonishment Starfire walks in and says she'd like to particapate.
Next you could pit Raven against Jinx in some kind of battle of wits. Azarathian v/s Socceress.
And then my last one (probably not all that great), is a classic game of "Chase me" between Robin and Starfire. You could make to where Robin has to catch her before a certain time or something.
Well those are my suggestions, use them in what ever way you choose. And I promise the next time you update I won't be this late. Laters!
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12/17/2007 c2 ThSamurai
First let me just apologize for making you wait this long for my review of THIS chapter, let alone the next one. I am sorry but three jobs, bad luck, and heavy snowfall kept me away from my computer. Am I forgiven...buddy?
Oh well, the review is nye!
One never gets tired of moments involving Raven and Beast Boy. There's just something about their chemistry that makes each one just as entertaining as the last. I nearly slammed my shut at his joke to Raven and Jinx because I just couldn't watch the insuing consequences. Luckily a bruise was all he got.
And yes I am fan enough to know when our fearless leader is talking to Thunder and Lightening. Course, maybe I'm so much of a fan that I'm still hopless. Na.
I'm gonna take a stab in the dark and say that our mystery bad guy here is...Slade! Yes? No? Probably no. It sure seemed like him, what with how he positivley sneered at the Brotherhood. Okay, next chapter!
ThSamurai -
First let me just apologize for making you wait this long for my review of THIS chapter, let alone the next one. I am sorry but three jobs, bad luck, and heavy snowfall kept me away from my computer. Am I forgiven...buddy?
Oh well, the review is nye!
One never gets tired of moments involving Raven and Beast Boy. There's just something about their chemistry that makes each one just as entertaining as the last. I nearly slammed my shut at his joke to Raven and Jinx because I just couldn't watch the insuing consequences. Luckily a bruise was all he got.
And yes I am fan enough to know when our fearless leader is talking to Thunder and Lightening. Course, maybe I'm so much of a fan that I'm still hopless. Na.
I'm gonna take a stab in the dark and say that our mystery bad guy here is...Slade! Yes? No? Probably no. It sure seemed like him, what with how he positivley sneered at the Brotherhood. Okay, next chapter!
ThSamurai -
12/15/2007 c3 13LittleMissWriter91
No need to worry, I know quite a bit about Kid Flash and The Flash. They got their powers when they were struck by lightening, right?
This kinda reminds me of one of the Titansgo comics, ya know, the one where the Spanish twins and KF had a race. Only read the first few pages, so I didn't see who won. (Kinda hoping it's gonna be KF)
I'm really sorry for taking so long!
~*Tsuki*~
13LittleMissWriter91No need to worry, I know quite a bit about Kid Flash and The Flash. They got their powers when they were struck by lightening, right?
This kinda reminds me of one of the Titansgo comics, ya know, the one where the Spanish twins and KF had a race. Only read the first few pages, so I didn't see who won. (Kinda hoping it's gonna be KF)
I'm really sorry for taking so long!
~*Tsuki*~
12/15/2007 c2 LittleMissWriter91
Sorry for taking so long. I've kinda been away, and the place had limited internet access. I have having to pay for internet access.
Jinx rocks, hands down. I never used to like her at the start, but my opinion gradually changed. I liked her even more after Lightspeed.
Ya gotta love Beast Boy and his boyishness. I know I do, and Cyborg going all "baby" about his car was hillarious.
Once again, I'm very sorry. I hope this truckload of marshmellows is enough to say I'm sorry. They should be over in the next hour or so...
~*Tsuki*~
Sorry for taking so long. I've kinda been away, and the place had limited internet access. I have having to pay for internet access.
Jinx rocks, hands down. I never used to like her at the start, but my opinion gradually changed. I liked her even more after Lightspeed.
Ya gotta love Beast Boy and his boyishness. I know I do, and Cyborg going all "baby" about his car was hillarious.
Once again, I'm very sorry. I hope this truckload of marshmellows is enough to say I'm sorry. They should be over in the next hour or so...
~*Tsuki*~
12/8/2007 c2 10StarWonder09
Dun dun dun. So much for a wonderful Christmas party. The bads guys always have to get in the way.
10StarWonder09Dun dun dun. So much for a wonderful Christmas party. The bads guys always have to get in the way.
12/8/2007 c1 StarWonder09
Thanks for letting me know about your new story! I've been so busy that I've sadly had little time for fanfiction. (But I am working on the next chapter as we speak.)
I loved the chicken part. I had actually thought about him myself. Great chapter!
Thanks for letting me know about your new story! I've been so busy that I've sadly had little time for fanfiction. (But I am working on the next chapter as we speak.)
I loved the chicken part. I had actually thought about him myself. Great chapter!
12/8/2007 c2 10Splint
I got around to checking out this fic of yours.
So far, I think it's pretty nice. Your characters do seem a bit OOC but that's forgivable enough though. The interaction between the cast is nice too.
I'm glad that there seems to be a little excitement coming from how the second chapter ended. I look forward to finding out who that creepy guy is though I already have my guesses.
Update soon!
10SplintI got around to checking out this fic of yours.
So far, I think it's pretty nice. Your characters do seem a bit OOC but that's forgivable enough though. The interaction between the cast is nice too.
I'm glad that there seems to be a little excitement coming from how the second chapter ended. I look forward to finding out who that creepy guy is though I already have my guesses.
Update soon!
12/7/2007 c2 7Kioyuki Oniga
Great fic, I like christmas fics, especially near christmas, it's like TV christmas specials only better, it'll be itneresting to see who shows up in the next chapter, so please update soon
7Kioyuki OnigaGreat fic, I like christmas fics, especially near christmas, it's like TV christmas specials only better, it'll be itneresting to see who shows up in the next chapter, so please update soon
12/7/2007 c1 anonymous
love the story. can't wait for more!
love the story. can't wait for more!
12/7/2007 c2 96Shadow Crystal Mage
Nice. Finally getting to the interesting parts, and so fast too! Lesser writers would have drawn it out with inane jokes.
Good to see Jinx and Raven getting along. Will the Justice League be showing up?
I don't suppose I can talk you into importing my version of Raven for a non-cannonical crossover...?
:)
Well, good look and advanced Merry Christmas!
96Shadow Crystal MageNice. Finally getting to the interesting parts, and so fast too! Lesser writers would have drawn it out with inane jokes.
Good to see Jinx and Raven getting along. Will the Justice League be showing up?
I don't suppose I can talk you into importing my version of Raven for a non-cannonical crossover...?
:)
Well, good look and advanced Merry Christmas!
12/5/2007 c1 Geojas378
Hi! I like your story... and if you EVER have a need for a Beast Boy, Jericho, or Red X fan girl, you know who to call! XD BB's old friends... Hm... I could think of five people. Terra, Jericho, Mas(or was it Menos?), Pantha, and Herald... Although Terra really has zero chance of showing up, though... Oh well...
Terra: Excuse me?
Face it, Terra. Everyone either hates or loves you...
Terra: *holds up finger and opens mouth slightly reminisenct of Kid Flash, but then turns angry* Come ON! I TURNED TO STONE, WHADDA YA PEOPLE WANT? ME TO GO OUT CHRISTMAS CAROLING IN A ROBIN OUFIT AND A SANTA HAT?
*one hour later*
Terra: *in Robin oufit and Santa hat, noticably very angry* Jingle bells, jingle bells, jingle all the way...
Hah... Merry Christmas... XD
Hi! I like your story... and if you EVER have a need for a Beast Boy, Jericho, or Red X fan girl, you know who to call! XD BB's old friends... Hm... I could think of five people. Terra, Jericho, Mas(or was it Menos?), Pantha, and Herald... Although Terra really has zero chance of showing up, though... Oh well...
Terra: Excuse me?
Face it, Terra. Everyone either hates or loves you...
Terra: *holds up finger and opens mouth slightly reminisenct of Kid Flash, but then turns angry* Come ON! I TURNED TO STONE, WHADDA YA PEOPLE WANT? ME TO GO OUT CHRISTMAS CAROLING IN A ROBIN OUFIT AND A SANTA HAT?
*one hour later*
Terra: *in Robin oufit and Santa hat, noticably very angry* Jingle bells, jingle bells, jingle all the way...
Hah... Merry Christmas... XD
12/5/2007 c1 23ThSamurai
Pretty good start, you said you wrote some time ago? If so why didn't you publish it any time earlier? That's the only thing that puzzles me at the moment. Also one thing about Starfire (yes I'm a bit nitpicky about it) is that she doen't use contractions. She doesn't say "can't" but insteads says "Can not". Its a combination of her royal upbringing and her lacking complete full knowlege of the English language.
Other than that one thing, I see no wrongs in this story. Jinx is understandably nervous about stepping into former enemy territory. I would be. Also I like how Robin just completely ignored the fan girls, like its something he deals with everyday. hope you udpate this soon. Laters!
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23ThSamuraiPretty good start, you said you wrote some time ago? If so why didn't you publish it any time earlier? That's the only thing that puzzles me at the moment. Also one thing about Starfire (yes I'm a bit nitpicky about it) is that she doen't use contractions. She doesn't say "can't" but insteads says "Can not". Its a combination of her royal upbringing and her lacking complete full knowlege of the English language.
Other than that one thing, I see no wrongs in this story. Jinx is understandably nervous about stepping into former enemy territory. I would be. Also I like how Robin just completely ignored the fan girls, like its something he deals with everyday. hope you udpate this soon. Laters!
ThSamurai -