1/18/2010 c10 Ann Jinn
A beautiful story. Came across it in the Obi-Wan Qui-Gon series. Am glad I did.
Good work with the partnership and feelings between the two, master and padawan. Good title and the way you carried it over into the strength of the jedi.
A beautiful story. Came across it in the Obi-Wan Qui-Gon series. Am glad I did.
Good work with the partnership and feelings between the two, master and padawan. Good title and the way you carried it over into the strength of the jedi.
11/16/2008 c10 40Jedi Ani Unduli
Yeah, totally awesome pretty Twi'lek comes to save the day! WHOPE! Ani is happy, and ani says to do more, so please, more?
Yeah, totally awesome pretty Twi'lek comes to save the day! WHOPE! Ani is happy, and ani says to do more, so please, more?
7/16/2004 c9 jedi keliam kenobi
great!story. poor obi.:( i liked it. i look forward to more of your stories.:)
great!story. poor obi.:( i liked it. i look forward to more of your stories.:)
3/7/2003 c10 6Lobo Kendo
This was one of those incredibly long fics that I don't mind taking time out of my day to read. It was exciting, inspiring, and above all, entertaining. I'll read more of your works very soon and I hope they are all at this level of quality.
This was one of those incredibly long fics that I don't mind taking time out of my day to read. It was exciting, inspiring, and above all, entertaining. I'll read more of your works very soon and I hope they are all at this level of quality.
11/3/2001 c10 Ginger Ninja
*loud applause* Way to go sis! An excellent end to a superb fic! ^_^ So, will there be a sequel anytime soon? =D ~GN/GJ~
*loud applause* Way to go sis! An excellent end to a superb fic! ^_^ So, will there be a sequel anytime soon? =D ~GN/GJ~
11/3/2001 c10 Jedi Jenn
Ohhhh, that was such a great story, good job!
Ohhhh, that was such a great story, good job!
11/3/2001 c5 Jedi Jenn
Noooooooooooo! You can't stop now, please post the next part! Hurry, I can't take the suspense!
Noooooooooooo! You can't stop now, please post the next part! Hurry, I can't take the suspense!
10/12/2001 c9 shen panda
all i have to say is that i was a fool to believe that you could write a chapter that did not have a cliffhanger.
all i have to say is that i was a fool to believe that you could write a chapter that did not have a cliffhanger.
10/11/2001 c9 neoji
YES! IT IS ALMOST DONE! YAY! I totally love this fic and can't wait till the next chapter ^_^ Oh! And thanks for your e-mail! Well GOODLUCK on the next chapter and write on LoL :)
YES! IT IS ALMOST DONE! YAY! I totally love this fic and can't wait till the next chapter ^_^ Oh! And thanks for your e-mail! Well GOODLUCK on the next chapter and write on LoL :)
10/11/2001 c9 jedi jaina
urgh! another cliff-hanger another night without sleep. As usual it was well written so write another one as soon as you can!
urgh! another cliff-hanger another night without sleep. As usual it was well written so write another one as soon as you can!
10/11/2001 c9 Becky bekybob13aol.com
I'd love another email update! GREAT STORY! But you already knew that... :)
I'd love another email update! GREAT STORY! But you already knew that... :)
10/11/2001 c9 Ginger Ninja
SOOOOO good sis! Poor Obi! We are FAR too hard on the boy... ]:) Not that we should stop... =P Excellent writing and DON'T LET OBI DIE!
SOOOOO good sis! Poor Obi! We are FAR too hard on the boy... ]:) Not that we should stop... =P Excellent writing and DON'T LET OBI DIE!
10/10/2001 c8 Salak
more more! this is so good!
more more! this is so good!