for On Spring2/17/2009 c1 Cassandra
Beautiful so beautiful
You Have talent
Beautiful so beautiful
You Have talent
12/19/2007 c1 
14Silver Shoelaces
When you started the poem with the stanza, "Within ice/there was warmth/and it melted/just a little bit" it sounded like it was going to be a quiet, peaceful, romantic poem. Then you continued, "Then it got hit/with a soccer ball,/which shattered it/completely" and I couldn't stop laughing.
X3
14Silver ShoelacesWhen you started the poem with the stanza, "Within ice/there was warmth/and it melted/just a little bit" it sounded like it was going to be a quiet, peaceful, romantic poem. Then you continued, "Then it got hit/with a soccer ball,/which shattered it/completely" and I couldn't stop laughing.
X3
12/7/2007 c1 1never-know-never-knew
this poem was so nice. really sweet and funny, at the same time sad. Really interesting and creative. Job well done.
1never-know-never-knewthis poem was so nice. really sweet and funny, at the same time sad. Really interesting and creative. Job well done.