for The Snowed in Christmas4/21/2014 c1 musariven13
I loved it
I loved it
7/25/2009 c1 m
This is really good! And I love the song.
This is really good! And I love the song.
3/23/2008 c1 
1khaoticteacher
This is one of my favorite stories. I didn;t know that you wrote this. Let me know when your next story comes out. I wanna read it.
1khaoticteacherThis is one of my favorite stories. I didn;t know that you wrote this. Let me know when your next story comes out. I wanna read it.
12/10/2007 c1 AnnieBelle
Lovely, dahhling, simply lovely.
An excellent Christmas story!
Lovely, dahhling, simply lovely.
An excellent Christmas story!
12/8/2007 c1 Gabriella-Angel
It was good, really. There were some mistakes which I'll kindly point out:
Whenever someone talks, it really should start a new paragraph. That way, people know if it's the same person talking or someone else.
Also, there were some spelling mistakes; I'm horrible at spelling myself, so I use a spell check-just make sure words like "Winx" and "Magix" and other winxclub planets (Sparx, Solaria, ect.) are added to your list of words.
Other then that, it was pretty good. Good story line, and I liked picturing what it all looked like. You're a good author, really; just make sure you work on spelling and paragraphing.
It was good, really. There were some mistakes which I'll kindly point out:
Whenever someone talks, it really should start a new paragraph. That way, people know if it's the same person talking or someone else.
Also, there were some spelling mistakes; I'm horrible at spelling myself, so I use a spell check-just make sure words like "Winx" and "Magix" and other winxclub planets (Sparx, Solaria, ect.) are added to your list of words.
Other then that, it was pretty good. Good story line, and I liked picturing what it all looked like. You're a good author, really; just make sure you work on spelling and paragraphing.
12/8/2007 c1 Jo
i love your story. but could u tell me the song tile for the cheata girls? thx!
i love your story. but could u tell me the song tile for the cheata girls? thx!
12/7/2007 c1 16Destination's d e s t i n y
Definetly made my christmas! I was wondering that when will you write a new story and you wrote it IN THE MONTH OF CHRITSMAS! I am very happy! The paragraphs were all bunched up so it was a bit confusing but other wise it was god.
16Destination's d e s t i n yDefinetly made my christmas! I was wondering that when will you write a new story and you wrote it IN THE MONTH OF CHRITSMAS! I am very happy! The paragraphs were all bunched up so it was a bit confusing but other wise it was god.