for Citadel1/4/2009 c1 
25innuendoblues
That was really interesting. I like the way it sounds if you read it aloud.
But... I keep getting the feeling that it could be anyone. It wasn't about Ginny, it wasn't about Pansy, it was like two different people we know nothing about. I realize it's just a drabble but to me it's a big flaw.
That aside, it's a really good piece.
25innuendobluesThat was really interesting. I like the way it sounds if you read it aloud.
But... I keep getting the feeling that it could be anyone. It wasn't about Ginny, it wasn't about Pansy, it was like two different people we know nothing about. I realize it's just a drabble but to me it's a big flaw.
That aside, it's a really good piece.
1/3/2009 c1 16bedroomwall
so beautiful! o_o man, i really loved it!
i was just looking for something, and it was a wonderful surprise to find that. is certainly one of the best things I ever read about this couple.
congratulations!
xoxo
16bedroomwallso beautiful! o_o man, i really loved it!
i was just looking for something, and it was a wonderful surprise to find that. is certainly one of the best things I ever read about this couple.
congratulations!
xoxo
7/22/2008 c1 11Mione of Ravenclaw
Interesting pairing; I never considered this one. Even though it's drabblish, I really liked it. Good job!
11Mione of RavenclawInteresting pairing; I never considered this one. Even though it's drabblish, I really liked it. Good job!