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1/4/2009 c1 25innuendoblues
That was really interesting. I like the way it sounds if you read it aloud.

But... I keep getting the feeling that it could be anyone. It wasn't about Ginny, it wasn't about Pansy, it was like two different people we know nothing about. I realize it's just a drabble but to me it's a big flaw.

That aside, it's a really good piece.
1/3/2009 c1 16bedroomwall
so beautiful! o_o man, i really loved it!

i was just looking for something, and it was a wonderful surprise to find that. is certainly one of the best things I ever read about this couple.

congratulations!

xoxo
7/22/2008 c1 11Mione of Ravenclaw
Interesting pairing; I never considered this one. Even though it's drabblish, I really liked it. Good job!
5/16/2008 c1 5Snowfly
aw !

such a cute, little drabbel...I really liked it.

your expression is great, and you've choosen the right words.

sorry if my english isn't that good, i'm german.

hugs and kisses

snowfly
4/10/2008 c1 27ScreamForSOH
I like it.

Well done.

xoxo

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