
9/30/2014 c1
8lovemya2000
Awesome. And I Notice Peter Didn't Chime In For Lily To Save Herself. Hmmm...This Is Heartbreakingly Nostalgic In Hindsight. Poor Order

Awesome. And I Notice Peter Didn't Chime In For Lily To Save Herself. Hmmm...This Is Heartbreakingly Nostalgic In Hindsight. Poor Order
3/8/2014 c1 danimaltauro
I love it! (again) Your stories are wonderful!
"'Lily, run away' James, Sirius and Remus sshouted at the same time" awww
I love it! (again) Your stories are wonderful!
"'Lily, run away' James, Sirius and Remus sshouted at the same time" awww
7/6/2013 c1
7jaythekoala
Just a contribution, Rowling herself admits that mathematics isn't her strong suit, so her making a mistake is certainly not out of the question... It's also a possibility that the McKinnons referred to in Lily's letter were a different branch of the family.
Great story! I've been reading through all of them actually and there are some very good reads. Thanks for sharing.

Just a contribution, Rowling herself admits that mathematics isn't her strong suit, so her making a mistake is certainly not out of the question... It's also a possibility that the McKinnons referred to in Lily's letter were a different branch of the family.
Great story! I've been reading through all of them actually and there are some very good reads. Thanks for sharing.
1/2/2013 c1
9OnginalMaz
I did not get teary eyed while reading this.
Not even a little bit.
Okay but they were infisimil.
Lots of people believe that Marlene wasn't killed along with her family. And this photo was taken before Harry was born so that means Cordac dissappeared 10 months (I think) before the end of the war.

I did not get teary eyed while reading this.
Not even a little bit.
Okay but they were infisimil.
Lots of people believe that Marlene wasn't killed along with her family. And this photo was taken before Harry was born so that means Cordac dissappeared 10 months (I think) before the end of the war.
4/13/2011 c1
5D a n c i n g with S t a r s
Hi
I've just re-read all of your stories and wanted to say thet your the best author whose stories i've ever read. Keep writing
Thx Neechee-Star xxx

Hi
I've just re-read all of your stories and wanted to say thet your the best author whose stories i've ever read. Keep writing
Thx Neechee-Star xxx
4/3/2010 c1 SpookyMoth
I am crying. Always the quotations from the book...I really could hear Moody talking close in my ear during the meeting of the Order of the Phoenix. It was so sad but also wonderful...
I am crying. Always the quotations from the book...I really could hear Moody talking close in my ear during the meeting of the Order of the Phoenix. It was so sad but also wonderful...
8/20/2008 c1
5Anrui Shino
I absolutely loved this story, favorited it and then fowarded it to my friend. :] It gave me chills-Moody's grim recount of the fates of those pictured against the cheerful scene! E! Excellent-and as for the time problem, well, Lily says "McKinnons" so it's possible that something else happened to the family in addition to Marlene's disappearance.
It's also slightly possible that she just heard about Marlene's disappearance-they're at war after all, and it wouldn't be feasible for everyone to keep track of everyone else right? (Maybe it would've even been safer that way in case one of them got caught and Voldemort used Legilimency on them and was able to find out even a little bit of some plans!) In addition to that, they had to go into hiding, possibly for some time before they used the Fidelius, so you know, self preservation thing might make it easy to lose track of those that aren't your closest loved ones.
But that's just what I think about it :] It might just be more feasible to think that JKR made a mistake XD.
Excellent, excellent story either way! It was fabulous.
- A. Shino

I absolutely loved this story, favorited it and then fowarded it to my friend. :] It gave me chills-Moody's grim recount of the fates of those pictured against the cheerful scene! E! Excellent-and as for the time problem, well, Lily says "McKinnons" so it's possible that something else happened to the family in addition to Marlene's disappearance.
It's also slightly possible that she just heard about Marlene's disappearance-they're at war after all, and it wouldn't be feasible for everyone to keep track of everyone else right? (Maybe it would've even been safer that way in case one of them got caught and Voldemort used Legilimency on them and was able to find out even a little bit of some plans!) In addition to that, they had to go into hiding, possibly for some time before they used the Fidelius, so you know, self preservation thing might make it easy to lose track of those that aren't your closest loved ones.
But that's just what I think about it :] It might just be more feasible to think that JKR made a mistake XD.
Excellent, excellent story either way! It was fabulous.
- A. Shino
6/25/2008 c1 OrangeR0se
Rowling can, I'd guess:D
stressed’ Alice said smiling even if she were still pale.
Change were to was?
This was also very sweet!
Rowling can, I'd guess:D
stressed’ Alice said smiling even if she were still pale.
Change were to was?
This was also very sweet!
6/16/2008 c1 Laura
Oh gosh ur really relly at makign me cry but in such a good way. i loved this almost as much as the "little more love" fanifc u wrote. maybe try writing some of ur own material instead of HP (even though its brillinat) u'll probably end up writing somehting globally inspiring. thnx for posting it made my day. ur a very skilled author
Oh gosh ur really relly at makign me cry but in such a good way. i loved this almost as much as the "little more love" fanifc u wrote. maybe try writing some of ur own material instead of HP (even though its brillinat) u'll probably end up writing somehting globally inspiring. thnx for posting it made my day. ur a very skilled author
6/13/2008 c1 Il'Diko
"Lily, run away!’ James, Sirius and Remus shouted at the same time."
"Yes, she’s pregnant with MY godson. Or god-daughter. Whetever!’ Sirius screamed. "
This was incredible, amazing! And those abowe are my favs! :) It was sad, but in the same time conforting, it was realy good!
"Lily, run away!’ James, Sirius and Remus shouted at the same time."
"Yes, she’s pregnant with MY godson. Or god-daughter. Whetever!’ Sirius screamed. "
This was incredible, amazing! And those abowe are my favs! :) It was sad, but in the same time conforting, it was realy good!
6/11/2008 c1
4Dibss
Omg!
I truly truly LOVED this FF and the idea for it!
It seems so original!
Btw, I really liked how each character was shown acting an dimmediatel after that it was just stated what happened to them… that made it seem so much more real and sad… like flashbacks or something!
I don’t usually like non-romance or non-humour FFs unless theyre really good, but this was well written :) and is going onto my faves list :)
~LilyScorpius

Omg!
I truly truly LOVED this FF and the idea for it!
It seems so original!
Btw, I really liked how each character was shown acting an dimmediatel after that it was just stated what happened to them… that made it seem so much more real and sad… like flashbacks or something!
I don’t usually like non-romance or non-humour FFs unless theyre really good, but this was well written :) and is going onto my faves list :)
~LilyScorpius