7/30/2017 c1 2Roseamber-ruby
Aerrow's musing in the last paragraph, & especially the very last line of this shot, ha ha, it was SO relatable for me.

Beautifully written!

3/3/2010 c1 5Dieced
You know, I can see that. I can see something like this actually happening. Finn might belong on Vapos, but Aerrow belongs in the sky, or the battlefield. To lose it would devastate him, maybe even cause him to lose his sanity.

Very well written, Aerrow and Finn were beautifully in character, and the story was believable. Great job!

4/8/2008 c1 13Lzsmith8
Ah. Thank you. Exactly what I was looking for.

Finn is a kickass character. He's a shallow blond, livin' the high life and lovin' it, but he's also a dedicated hero, who knows exactly where's hes going in life.

Vapos is Finn's home. He cares for the place the way Stork cares for the Condor. It's his always.

And I feel for Aerrow. The sky knight who may end up saving the world, and who never wants to leave the sky. Bittersweet.

Thanks for posting this. Keep writing ya 'ear?

Liz

1/28/2008 c1 2SyntheticEuph0ria
That's. . . some really interesting insight into Aerrow's head. Really deep, ya know?

Great work on this.

On an unrelated note, I'd still love to see a continuation of Saturday Night Entertainment. ^_~

It wouldn't even have to be a lemon! I'd just love to see what happened /after/ the whole thing. . .

12/11/2007 c1 Mouse-Mouse
Ugh. Stupid ff . net...

I did say before my review was chopped up how wonderful it was to see Finn lie back and think about things for a change. Shows his rare maturity.

Loved it

12/10/2007 c1 46nasmira13
That. Right there.

Is the stuff I'm after, the stuff I'm talking about.

I've always gotten the feeling that Aerrow hated the thought of not being a Storm Hawk anymore. Its almost heartbreaking...how much he loves what he does that he cant bear leaving it behind.

And lets not forget Finn acting deep; nearly finding himself, if you will. There are just places like that where you feel connected to everything and you feel whole. I love the fact that Finn has found that place and he's given a sense of completion finally.

This fic actually makes me worried for Aerrow. You know those old people who are depressed because their careers were their entire lives and then they're suddenly plunged into doing...well, nothing really? I have a feeling that'll happen to Aerrow. And its a terrible way to finish out the rest of one's life. I had some ideas that were quite similar to this, but goodness you put them in ways that I could only dream of doing. A happy ethereal little sequitur for Finn perhaps, but Aerrow...perhaps not.

So profound.

12/10/2007 c1 51Summing up the Stars
Nicely done. It's really pretty, although it's also kinda sad. ^^; It makes you want to hug Aerrow and not let go.