for Sacrifices4/24 c4 Guest
Edward left Bella.
Edward left Bella.
4/8 c1 Guest
I don’t usually read much fanfiction, but I figured out how to export to epub so I could have this on my Kindle in case it ever gets lost in the annals of the internet. A comforting AU, despite all the pain!
I don’t usually read much fanfiction, but I figured out how to export to epub so I could have this on my Kindle in case it ever gets lost in the annals of the internet. A comforting AU, despite all the pain!
2/7 c45 Guest
It's been 10 years. Are you for real Bella. She is so dramatic
It's been 10 years. Are you for real Bella. She is so dramatic
2/7 c39 Guest
This is getting annoying. Why are you dragging this for so long. Just tell her you love her ffs
This is getting annoying. Why are you dragging this for so long. Just tell her you love her ffs
2/7 c17 Guest
I know this fic is so old but it would have been much better to switch the povs but continue the story.. This way it gets kinda exhausting bec there is no new information. Just the same stuff from a different pov
I know this fic is so old but it would have been much better to switch the povs but continue the story.. This way it gets kinda exhausting bec there is no new information. Just the same stuff from a different pov
12/15/2024 c35 lcthesecond
I'm really hating Bella... Why does she let anyone dictate anything about her. It's so frustrating to read. Hasn't she developed after school?
I'm really hating Bella... Why does she let anyone dictate anything about her. It's so frustrating to read. Hasn't she developed after school?
12/10/2024 c30 lcthesecond
Honestly, I hate how the Cullens impose on Bella's life and she is too weak willed to set her foot down and set boundaries or to deny them things. Right now she doe not show any maturity.
Honestly, I hate how the Cullens impose on Bella's life and she is too weak willed to set her foot down and set boundaries or to deny them things. Right now she doe not show any maturity.
11/25/2024 c45 LadySnowdon
I'm really enjoying this story! I came across it because it was recommended somewhere (FB or Reddit) its fantastic. I like the idea of Bella as independent vampire, despite the awful path that led to that. And the reconnection with the Cullens was lovely, despite the constant miscommunication betweenn her and Edward. Oh the angst! They're all going through the wringer right now. I've been binge reading all day and can't wait to see what happens next! No idea if you still see these reviews but I wanted to say thanks for such a great a fic.
I'm really enjoying this story! I came across it because it was recommended somewhere (FB or Reddit) its fantastic. I like the idea of Bella as independent vampire, despite the awful path that led to that. And the reconnection with the Cullens was lovely, despite the constant miscommunication betweenn her and Edward. Oh the angst! They're all going through the wringer right now. I've been binge reading all day and can't wait to see what happens next! No idea if you still see these reviews but I wanted to say thanks for such a great a fic.
11/24/2024 c1 
3disguisedpen
First of all, I’m not a great writer, but I don’t understand why everyone considers this one of the best. Sure, you have an interesting plot, but I couldn’t bring myself to read everything. The dialogue is corny, and the alternating POVs between Edward and Bella (with Bella narrating and another POV showing Edward reacting) feel redundant. I understand that you wanted to show Edward’s perspective, but it could have been written in a less corny and repetitive way.
Bella’s characterization is strange as well. Yes, she has matured, which explains why she forgave them so easily, but she doesn’t owe them an explanation. The Cullens left, and that’s that. If they had questions, she could’ve given straightforward answers, but the drawn-out, tell-all sob story felt overly dramatic, as if it took days to explain everything. I actually stopped reading by Chapter 15.
I enjoyed the Jacob imprinting drama, but Bella sharing so many personal details felt unrealistic. It was almost like she could’ve told them what color her underwear was every single day—that’s how overly specific it became.
3disguisedpenFirst of all, I’m not a great writer, but I don’t understand why everyone considers this one of the best. Sure, you have an interesting plot, but I couldn’t bring myself to read everything. The dialogue is corny, and the alternating POVs between Edward and Bella (with Bella narrating and another POV showing Edward reacting) feel redundant. I understand that you wanted to show Edward’s perspective, but it could have been written in a less corny and repetitive way.
Bella’s characterization is strange as well. Yes, she has matured, which explains why she forgave them so easily, but she doesn’t owe them an explanation. The Cullens left, and that’s that. If they had questions, she could’ve given straightforward answers, but the drawn-out, tell-all sob story felt overly dramatic, as if it took days to explain everything. I actually stopped reading by Chapter 15.
I enjoyed the Jacob imprinting drama, but Bella sharing so many personal details felt unrealistic. It was almost like she could’ve told them what color her underwear was every single day—that’s how overly specific it became.
9/3/2024 c53 3NoWayWithWords
This is the story that inspired my anniversary gift of having a Dearest ring designed for me at w jewelry store in Savannah! I love my dearest ring and never take it off! (Wedding band/engagement ting on my left hand, and dearest ring ob my right!
3NoWayWithWordsThis is the story that inspired my anniversary gift of having a Dearest ring designed for me at w jewelry store in Savannah! I love my dearest ring and never take it off! (Wedding band/engagement ting on my left hand, and dearest ring ob my right!
7/21/2024 c1 Chappeljacob3
This story changed my life and is very captivating I hope to see you write more in the future but for now, I will reread it many times. 3
This story changed my life and is very captivating I hope to see you write more in the future but for now, I will reread it many times. 3
5/26/2024 c59 blb1000
Thank you for completing this story! It's tough to see many characters die, but that's the "reality" of it. ;-)
Thank you for completing this story! It's tough to see many characters die, but that's the "reality" of it. ;-)