for Inertia Creeps6/13/2024 c22 Pure happiness
I remember reading this story about 10 years ago, and I loved it then as I do now. I recently got back into reading and after finishing a book I remembered a much better story. It took me a small while to find it but I got here and I'm so glad. It's just as wonderful the second time around. I hope you're well, and if by some magic you pop back here, thank you for writing this as it is one of my favourite stories. It's incredibly well written and will remain my favourite from this site.
I remember reading this story about 10 years ago, and I loved it then as I do now. I recently got back into reading and after finishing a book I remembered a much better story. It took me a small while to find it but I got here and I'm so glad. It's just as wonderful the second time around. I hope you're well, and if by some magic you pop back here, thank you for writing this as it is one of my favourite stories. It's incredibly well written and will remain my favourite from this site.
6/19/2022 c1 little axel
I love this story so much. I first read it when I was 14 and I come back to read it every so often. I’m 22 now and have realized I grew up and have now become Cloud living with my “roommate”. Life is wild.
I love this story so much. I first read it when I was 14 and I come back to read it every so often. I’m 22 now and have realized I grew up and have now become Cloud living with my “roommate”. Life is wild.
2/26/2021 c31 
2yaoixkiss
Okay, that was insane. I loved it. Incredible writing, great story. I think you portrayed the mental health issues really well and I was personally able to relate to them, it didn’t sound outlandish or fake. Really great story, fully binged it, I couldn’t put it down. Thank you for taking the time to write this !
2yaoixkissOkay, that was insane. I loved it. Incredible writing, great story. I think you portrayed the mental health issues really well and I was personally able to relate to them, it didn’t sound outlandish or fake. Really great story, fully binged it, I couldn’t put it down. Thank you for taking the time to write this !
8/12/2020 c31 4Suzuki Ai
I just want to say that i hold this story near and dear to my heart. This is my 3rd read through, and i've had this story save for years, often coming back to it at random points in time when it pops into my head, haha! Now, time to read the sequel again :)
4Suzuki AiI just want to say that i hold this story near and dear to my heart. This is my 3rd read through, and i've had this story save for years, often coming back to it at random points in time when it pops into my head, haha! Now, time to read the sequel again :)
2/17/2020 c31 adorning-morning
I know I already said this, but changing the names and self publishing is a FANTASTIC idea. You have 211k words in this story, that’s almost as big as Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix. You have 500-600 novel pages here. And self publishing is apparently really easy, you can utilize different websites and sell on amazon! You should look into itSigned, a new lifelong fan
I know I already said this, but changing the names and self publishing is a FANTASTIC idea. You have 211k words in this story, that’s almost as big as Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix. You have 500-600 novel pages here. And self publishing is apparently really easy, you can utilize different websites and sell on amazon! You should look into itSigned, a new lifelong fan
2/17/2020 c31 adorning-morning
I’m not sure how active you are anymore, or if you’ll even see this, but wow. It’s been a long time since I’ve read something that I not only couldn’t put down, but made me feel some kind of way. I didn’t know what to expect getting into this story, but it exceeded any and all expectations. A few chapters in, I actually forgot it was a fanfiction and it just became a very human novel. (I’m serious, you should revise it, change the names and self publish this as a separate novel. Please. I will purchase it.) It was almost scary how much this story resonated with me, and there were times it made me rehash my own past. The refreshing thing though, was even though you touched on these dark, gritty topics like rape, drug use, verbal and physical abuse, suicide and self harm, you in no way glorified it. These are tough subjects to approach in a way that isn’t triggering, and you nailed it. It was a story about healing. It was a story that made me want to heal. To stop being stagnant and ask for help when I need it.
Seriously though. It resonated in a scary way. Even the Portuguese resonated with me! My dad grew up in Brasil and he would always sing the Portuguese happy birthday. I agree with Axel— it’s much prettier than the American version!
Anyway, I just wanted to say thank you. This story is going to stay with me for a very, very long time.
I’m not sure how active you are anymore, or if you’ll even see this, but wow. It’s been a long time since I’ve read something that I not only couldn’t put down, but made me feel some kind of way. I didn’t know what to expect getting into this story, but it exceeded any and all expectations. A few chapters in, I actually forgot it was a fanfiction and it just became a very human novel. (I’m serious, you should revise it, change the names and self publish this as a separate novel. Please. I will purchase it.) It was almost scary how much this story resonated with me, and there were times it made me rehash my own past. The refreshing thing though, was even though you touched on these dark, gritty topics like rape, drug use, verbal and physical abuse, suicide and self harm, you in no way glorified it. These are tough subjects to approach in a way that isn’t triggering, and you nailed it. It was a story about healing. It was a story that made me want to heal. To stop being stagnant and ask for help when I need it.
Seriously though. It resonated in a scary way. Even the Portuguese resonated with me! My dad grew up in Brasil and he would always sing the Portuguese happy birthday. I agree with Axel— it’s much prettier than the American version!
Anyway, I just wanted to say thank you. This story is going to stay with me for a very, very long time.
3/29/2019 c31 1FalcoHeart
You know what, THIS IS ABSOLUTELY, AMAZING AND FANTASTIC STORY I EVER READ! The slow pace romance, the plot, the development-and so on are so great that I cannot put this story down no matter what. I freaking love it so much you know! I'm not gonna lie-Roxas and I really do have similarities, not the past but the depression and suicide attempts for several years. It took a huge effort to move forward and just like Roxas, I found someone to help me at long last. That's why I could understand Roxas feeling the entire story. Anyways, thank you so much for creating this story, I was entirely shock when I read the time about the reincarnation... didn't expected for KH2 scene to popped in this story. You're aweseom author!
1FalcoHeartYou know what, THIS IS ABSOLUTELY, AMAZING AND FANTASTIC STORY I EVER READ! The slow pace romance, the plot, the development-and so on are so great that I cannot put this story down no matter what. I freaking love it so much you know! I'm not gonna lie-Roxas and I really do have similarities, not the past but the depression and suicide attempts for several years. It took a huge effort to move forward and just like Roxas, I found someone to help me at long last. That's why I could understand Roxas feeling the entire story. Anyways, thank you so much for creating this story, I was entirely shock when I read the time about the reincarnation... didn't expected for KH2 scene to popped in this story. You're aweseom author!
8/10/2018 c26 SuperSaraMoon
Yay! Omg, so I’ve been reading this fic for well over 2 months nowFINALLY! A kiss. Lol
This is an amazingly well written story. I really like it. The character development is great. Axel is a sexy beast per ush. I understand why it took so many chapters to get here with all of Rox’s trauma. I just get impatient. I’m excited to see how it ends
Yay! Omg, so I’ve been reading this fic for well over 2 months nowFINALLY! A kiss. Lol
This is an amazingly well written story. I really like it. The character development is great. Axel is a sexy beast per ush. I understand why it took so many chapters to get here with all of Rox’s trauma. I just get impatient. I’m excited to see how it ends
7/5/2018 c1 SuperSaraMoon
Hey hey hey! Wow, a well written Kh fic I haven’t read! :D OMG, Lol. I love love loved this chapter! It was long, well written, and had great content! :D I’m honestly super stoked that it’s so longI know I’m gonna love reading this fic over the next week or so. <3
Off to chapter 2!
Hey hey hey! Wow, a well written Kh fic I haven’t read! :D OMG, Lol. I love love loved this chapter! It was long, well written, and had great content! :D I’m honestly super stoked that it’s so longI know I’m gonna love reading this fic over the next week or so. <3
Off to chapter 2!
3/4/2018 c31 4TheDreamOnElmStreet
I wonder if you still check your comments? I read this story like.. 6 years ago? When I was about 13 or 14 and I put it in my favorites way back then. Now I’m 21, and this year has been rough so I figured I’d rummage through my old favorites and try to immerse myself in fan fiction again. This is the first story I came back to! I didn’t remember anything when I first opened it but as the story went on, I got a nostalgic feeling of barely recognizing the story and experiencing it anew as a grown adult now. I love your story! It feels incredibly real, and the characters feel like plausible people. Not to mention, roxas’s mental illness is shown perfectly where he’s not like a helpless baby because of it, he’s still his own person just tied down and I know all too well that feeling. I hope your life is going wonderfully since you wrote this over 10 years ago, and thanks again for influencing me as a child about what true friends are like.
4TheDreamOnElmStreetI wonder if you still check your comments? I read this story like.. 6 years ago? When I was about 13 or 14 and I put it in my favorites way back then. Now I’m 21, and this year has been rough so I figured I’d rummage through my old favorites and try to immerse myself in fan fiction again. This is the first story I came back to! I didn’t remember anything when I first opened it but as the story went on, I got a nostalgic feeling of barely recognizing the story and experiencing it anew as a grown adult now. I love your story! It feels incredibly real, and the characters feel like plausible people. Not to mention, roxas’s mental illness is shown perfectly where he’s not like a helpless baby because of it, he’s still his own person just tied down and I know all too well that feeling. I hope your life is going wonderfully since you wrote this over 10 years ago, and thanks again for influencing me as a child about what true friends are like.
8/16/2017 c31 xxFall3n-Ang3lxx
I loved reading this story. I'm not usually too keen on stories that deal with suicide, but I actually liked this one a lot. It was written really well and, of course, I love Axel and Roxas lol thanks for writing this story!
I loved reading this story. I'm not usually too keen on stories that deal with suicide, but I actually liked this one a lot. It was written really well and, of course, I love Axel and Roxas lol thanks for writing this story!
1/5/2017 c30 7Panda54
...wasn't there more to the sex scene...? I could have sworn it was way more detailed when I read this before...maybe I'm just remembering it differently but I am so dissapointed at how cut and short it was...I wait the whole story and they have sex for like two paragraphs...*cries* guess I just gotta go read some smut lol...love this story still just so confused and let down.
7Panda54...wasn't there more to the sex scene...? I could have sworn it was way more detailed when I read this before...maybe I'm just remembering it differently but I am so dissapointed at how cut and short it was...I wait the whole story and they have sex for like two paragraphs...*cries* guess I just gotta go read some smut lol...love this story still just so confused and let down.
12/21/2016 c10 Panda54
I'm reading this again for like the tenth time...whenever I think of my favorite fanfic (or even just fave story) I think of Inertia Creeps :) I hold this story very near to my heart and am always excited to read it again. I know it's been years since you wrote this but I want to thank you again for writing such a masterpiece that is so cherishable! You are an amazing person and if I knew you in real life I would give you unlimited hugs! Heheh...love you and intertia creeps
I'm reading this again for like the tenth time...whenever I think of my favorite fanfic (or even just fave story) I think of Inertia Creeps :) I hold this story very near to my heart and am always excited to read it again. I know it's been years since you wrote this but I want to thank you again for writing such a masterpiece that is so cherishable! You are an amazing person and if I knew you in real life I would give you unlimited hugs! Heheh...love you and intertia creeps
5/15/2016 c31 sam
Hey-ya! Great story. I mean, took me a week to get through with school and everything so long ass story, but good. I applaud the plot. The story already got where I thought it was going in like the first 6 chapters, so it was really cool to not know where a sorry was going for a change.
Hey-ya! Great story. I mean, took me a week to get through with school and everything so long ass story, but good. I applaud the plot. The story already got where I thought it was going in like the first 6 chapters, so it was really cool to not know where a sorry was going for a change.