for Inertia Creeps4/4/2016 c1 
1Squirtlevsyoshi
This was an incredible story. I get so much in site and thinking done when I read this book. It just blows my mind what I good writer can do to the reader. It is honestly one of my favorite stories to read on here.
1SquirtlevsyoshiThis was an incredible story. I get so much in site and thinking done when I read this book. It just blows my mind what I good writer can do to the reader. It is honestly one of my favorite stories to read on here.
2/25/2016 c9 7morning means KH
Woaahh! I can't tolarate Axel's character! He is so damn hot and funny and sweet!:D
I like the story very much and I think the personalities are spot on! :)
7morning means KHWoaahh! I can't tolarate Axel's character! He is so damn hot and funny and sweet!:D
I like the story very much and I think the personalities are spot on! :)
2/13/2016 c31 HopeZidel
So, I started this story yesterday, and got all the way up to chapter 19. I had wanted to keep going, but of course, being as how I could hardly keep my eyes open, I just had to put it down in favor of some sleep.
Today, however, I can happily say that I have finished this incredible story. It is so very hard to find good stories, be it on here or on Wattpad or some other place, and to find one as good as this has really just made this weekend a blast.
You did an amazing job with this story, and I am seriously about to look to see what else you have written because I can't get enough. You made me feel deeply connected to Roxas in a way that I can hardly explain. I won't lie, I am dealing with issues of my own in my own life, not at all like Roxas experienced, but enough to where I know how hard it is to really get out and appreciate the world for what it is. I was so deeply moved by how he, with the help of lovable Axel, was able to fix himself up and get on with his life. I know it's unrealistic to say that he was perfectly fine at the end of the story, as I doubt anyone would ever be again after having gone through that, but I am happy that he at least got to a point where he can appreciate each and every day of his life with someone he truly loves.
You are an incredible author, and you wrote such a touching and moving story that I'm just at a loss of words (which is a total lie, I feel, as I've been rambling words out this entire review).
I can't wait to see what other incredible stories you decide to create for us and wish to thank you for allowing me the pleasure of reading such a beautiful story.
-Hope Zidel
So, I started this story yesterday, and got all the way up to chapter 19. I had wanted to keep going, but of course, being as how I could hardly keep my eyes open, I just had to put it down in favor of some sleep.
Today, however, I can happily say that I have finished this incredible story. It is so very hard to find good stories, be it on here or on Wattpad or some other place, and to find one as good as this has really just made this weekend a blast.
You did an amazing job with this story, and I am seriously about to look to see what else you have written because I can't get enough. You made me feel deeply connected to Roxas in a way that I can hardly explain. I won't lie, I am dealing with issues of my own in my own life, not at all like Roxas experienced, but enough to where I know how hard it is to really get out and appreciate the world for what it is. I was so deeply moved by how he, with the help of lovable Axel, was able to fix himself up and get on with his life. I know it's unrealistic to say that he was perfectly fine at the end of the story, as I doubt anyone would ever be again after having gone through that, but I am happy that he at least got to a point where he can appreciate each and every day of his life with someone he truly loves.
You are an incredible author, and you wrote such a touching and moving story that I'm just at a loss of words (which is a total lie, I feel, as I've been rambling words out this entire review).
I can't wait to see what other incredible stories you decide to create for us and wish to thank you for allowing me the pleasure of reading such a beautiful story.
-Hope Zidel
1/12/2016 c1 Gogglegirl
Based on this chapter, the story would be GREAT if I were brave enough to read forward. But I'm already suicidal enough as it is, and getting more ideas probably isn't a good idea.
Based on this chapter, the story would be GREAT if I were brave enough to read forward. But I'm already suicidal enough as it is, and getting more ideas probably isn't a good idea.
7/31/2015 c27 95Phantasmal Abduction
This story is... Fucking awesome.
I've lost count of how many times I've read it and I just can't stay away.
Your writing is so amazing that in the first half of the story I sometimes have to stop reading because it gets so tense and angsty that I actually can't keep reading and have to have some time out until I can get going again.
You. Fucking. Rock. I wish I could write like you.
95Phantasmal AbductionThis story is... Fucking awesome.
I've lost count of how many times I've read it and I just can't stay away.
Your writing is so amazing that in the first half of the story I sometimes have to stop reading because it gets so tense and angsty that I actually can't keep reading and have to have some time out until I can get going again.
You. Fucking. Rock. I wish I could write like you.
6/19/2015 c30 2RegalRebel
Oh my goodness, that was an in game reference from Kingdom hearts Re chain of memories and part of 358/2 and it makes me so happy to see that. Reading that made me smile, thank you KH game references!
2RegalRebelOh my goodness, that was an in game reference from Kingdom hearts Re chain of memories and part of 358/2 and it makes me so happy to see that. Reading that made me smile, thank you KH game references!
5/14/2015 c31 Guest
Amazing, beautiful, fantastic, captivating, dramatic, fucking awesome story! I read the whole thing within the past two days. I might be slightly addicted to this great fic. Absolutely one of my favorites! Thanks for this fan-freaking-tastic story! :)
Amazing, beautiful, fantastic, captivating, dramatic, fucking awesome story! I read the whole thing within the past two days. I might be slightly addicted to this great fic. Absolutely one of my favorites! Thanks for this fan-freaking-tastic story! :)
1/4/2015 c31 sparklesandskullz
Very lovely story as well as the message. I enjoyed it from beginning to end :)
Very lovely story as well as the message. I enjoyed it from beginning to end :)
12/15/2014 c31 78Rah Hasha
Wow... what an inspiring story. I think that there is a time when everyone needs their own Axel to come pick them up. What you did with this story was just simply amazing. Even if this review is a few years late, I just wanted you to know how awesome you are for writing this...
78Rah HashaWow... what an inspiring story. I think that there is a time when everyone needs their own Axel to come pick them up. What you did with this story was just simply amazing. Even if this review is a few years late, I just wanted you to know how awesome you are for writing this...
12/14/2014 c31 BambiLove
Thank you for a great story. It was an absolute pleasure to read!
I love your portrayal of characters, especially Axel. His mannerisms were perfect.
And i really enjoyed all the New York-ness. It's fun to read about places ive actually been.
Again, great story; it's definitely one of my favourites.
Now im off to read the sequel! (:
Thank you for a great story. It was an absolute pleasure to read!
I love your portrayal of characters, especially Axel. His mannerisms were perfect.
And i really enjoyed all the New York-ness. It's fun to read about places ive actually been.
Again, great story; it's definitely one of my favourites.
Now im off to read the sequel! (:
9/7/2014 c1 10Dorayaki-chan
It took me about a month to finish reading this fanfic. Well I'd say it's a month well spent. No other fanfic has captured my attention this long to read through it. I thought it would be a pain to go through all 31 chapters, but I was wrong. It was an absolute delight. I loved this story in all it's little memorable bits. The characters were so real and so in character. It was totally weird to have tsundere Roxas, but seeing the circumstances, I'd say it's pretty accurate. Having the sora riku pairing in here also gave me a lot of delight reading it. Overall, I'd have to say I really really enjoy that one month of reading this fanfic.
Keep writing!
10Dorayaki-chanIt took me about a month to finish reading this fanfic. Well I'd say it's a month well spent. No other fanfic has captured my attention this long to read through it. I thought it would be a pain to go through all 31 chapters, but I was wrong. It was an absolute delight. I loved this story in all it's little memorable bits. The characters were so real and so in character. It was totally weird to have tsundere Roxas, but seeing the circumstances, I'd say it's pretty accurate. Having the sora riku pairing in here also gave me a lot of delight reading it. Overall, I'd have to say I really really enjoy that one month of reading this fanfic.
Keep writing!
6/26/2014 c31 interstellarburst
I've really enjoyed your story. You've developed it so well - Roxas' transformation is so subtle and brilliant. One of my favourite fan fictions, you're amazing. Keep writing!
I've really enjoyed your story. You've developed it so well - Roxas' transformation is so subtle and brilliant. One of my favourite fan fictions, you're amazing. Keep writing!
5/25/2014 c31 5nodiggynondoubt
Holy wow... What a story! This was the best and I mean the BEST angst/romance story I've ever read on here! I've learned a lot from this story so much that I told someone close to me about something that was bothering me for quite a while and thought that I never could, and now I feel good about it :) thank you!
I kinda cried at the end lol! XD Roxas and Axel were portrayed very well in this story, especially Roxas. This was beyond fantastic story i mean... Wow, everything was on point and you didn't miss a beat, and it flowed perfectly! So thank you for writing this and your message at the end I hope people out there learned something from this story :D
See ya!
Firerix
5nodiggynondoubtHoly wow... What a story! This was the best and I mean the BEST angst/romance story I've ever read on here! I've learned a lot from this story so much that I told someone close to me about something that was bothering me for quite a while and thought that I never could, and now I feel good about it :) thank you!
I kinda cried at the end lol! XD Roxas and Axel were portrayed very well in this story, especially Roxas. This was beyond fantastic story i mean... Wow, everything was on point and you didn't miss a beat, and it flowed perfectly! So thank you for writing this and your message at the end I hope people out there learned something from this story :D
See ya!
Firerix