for Inertia Creeps3/26/2014 c1 iluvfandoms1
Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow... Seems interesting enough ima read this fic.
Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow... Seems interesting enough ima read this fic.
12/1/2013 c31 Fan.Fiction.Love
Wow! This was a really intense story. It was so realistic. TE characters were full of surprises and insecurities and humaness. I really enjoyed it. Thank you!
Wow! This was a really intense story. It was so realistic. TE characters were full of surprises and insecurities and humaness. I really enjoyed it. Thank you!
10/18/2013 c31 ShinigamiApples1
Simply genius. I don't have words to describe how wonderful this was and how accurate it is. That is exactly what I love the most. how relatable the characters and some of the situations are. You did a great job portraying Roxas's reactions due to his condition, A and like a million gold stars for not just making it all overly dramatic and fake but researching instead. Again simply wonderful, please never stop writing.
Love and Sea Salt ice cream, Paola.
Simply genius. I don't have words to describe how wonderful this was and how accurate it is. That is exactly what I love the most. how relatable the characters and some of the situations are. You did a great job portraying Roxas's reactions due to his condition, A and like a million gold stars for not just making it all overly dramatic and fake but researching instead. Again simply wonderful, please never stop writing.
Love and Sea Salt ice cream, Paola.
10/15/2013 c31 
1XxCapturetheLightxX
You know, sometimes I'll reread this fic, and every goddamn time it puts me to tears. Like. I don't know what you've done but you managed to make me cry at least three times(it's a long fic sue me) but anyway I don't know if I've ever left a review for you, and I just decided it was time to compliment your gorgeous fic. I've read a few other things from you, and I enjoy all of them immensely, but this fic. Oh man. This fic makes me feel like no other fic. Sure I've read angst, happy and sad endings, but this is my all time favourite. The way it flows is absolutely perfect, and the build up of the relationship is beautiful, and I can't seem to find any mistakes, no matter if I look for them or not and the ending. I'm smiling like an idiot just thinking about it omg. This is literally perfection, and for that I'm glad you wrote this. I'm sorry this is just a block of text but I'm on mobile ahaha anyway yes. Thank you for this fic.
1XxCapturetheLightxXYou know, sometimes I'll reread this fic, and every goddamn time it puts me to tears. Like. I don't know what you've done but you managed to make me cry at least three times(it's a long fic sue me) but anyway I don't know if I've ever left a review for you, and I just decided it was time to compliment your gorgeous fic. I've read a few other things from you, and I enjoy all of them immensely, but this fic. Oh man. This fic makes me feel like no other fic. Sure I've read angst, happy and sad endings, but this is my all time favourite. The way it flows is absolutely perfect, and the build up of the relationship is beautiful, and I can't seem to find any mistakes, no matter if I look for them or not and the ending. I'm smiling like an idiot just thinking about it omg. This is literally perfection, and for that I'm glad you wrote this. I'm sorry this is just a block of text but I'm on mobile ahaha anyway yes. Thank you for this fic.
9/14/2013 c1 Crucified Beloved
So I'm going to take this story one chapter at a time. I like doing that for long, completed stories because then it gives the author a perspective of the reader's opinions as the plot develops throughout the chapters.
So I have just recently gotten my internet back and was really in the mood for a long, detailed story. I was searching through pages and pages of KH fanfiction and stumbled across this, and I have to say, I am NOT disappointed so far. I loved the beginning, especially, with the way you described him dreaming of green eyes and red skies and disfigured birds and the like. It was really interesting. I hope you weaved more concepts like that into the story in the future. Also, I like to think of Roxas dreaming of the green eyes because Axel was watching him while he was in the coma. Maybe it's just me over-analyzing, but I love the idea of Ansem telling Axel about Roxas and Axel getting really intrigued and just watching him and wondering where this next journey will take him. Also, bonus points for Axel being in a band. Such a cliche, but I love that particular cliche. xP
I'm actually a little happy you had people actually care for him and his recovery, not delve into the cliche that no one gives a shit. I also realized that a lot of people might be hating on you or this story or something because of the fact you had Roxas hate Axel right away, but the thing is, it's kind of a given. It would be out of character, I think, for Roxas to like Axel right away. I am really excited to see how their relationship will develop.
Hmm, I'm a little disappointed with how annoying you made Kairi be, but I don't think I'm nearly far enough in the story to be making any judgments. I actually really like Rikku and Cloud, though, and love the little CloudxLeon you threw in there as well. 3 I hope we'll get to see more of that. I love how you made the family famous, to put all that extra added stress on Roxas's recovery. I've never seen that done before. I also like the way you made Teier, all strict and respected and no-shit. I don't like how he treats Roxas, though. However, I think it's great for the story. I'm a little intrigued with Sabel, too. I have a feeling she's going to break out of her shell and stand up to her husband and be a kick-ass motherfucker sometime in the story. xD
Overall, I have high hopes for this story and I'm really excited to continue reading. All my reviews won't be this long and blabby, I promise! And it's weird, I sound so mature and old and I'm really only a teenager. I should make my reviews more fun, you think? xD
So I'm going to take this story one chapter at a time. I like doing that for long, completed stories because then it gives the author a perspective of the reader's opinions as the plot develops throughout the chapters.
So I have just recently gotten my internet back and was really in the mood for a long, detailed story. I was searching through pages and pages of KH fanfiction and stumbled across this, and I have to say, I am NOT disappointed so far. I loved the beginning, especially, with the way you described him dreaming of green eyes and red skies and disfigured birds and the like. It was really interesting. I hope you weaved more concepts like that into the story in the future. Also, I like to think of Roxas dreaming of the green eyes because Axel was watching him while he was in the coma. Maybe it's just me over-analyzing, but I love the idea of Ansem telling Axel about Roxas and Axel getting really intrigued and just watching him and wondering where this next journey will take him. Also, bonus points for Axel being in a band. Such a cliche, but I love that particular cliche. xP
I'm actually a little happy you had people actually care for him and his recovery, not delve into the cliche that no one gives a shit. I also realized that a lot of people might be hating on you or this story or something because of the fact you had Roxas hate Axel right away, but the thing is, it's kind of a given. It would be out of character, I think, for Roxas to like Axel right away. I am really excited to see how their relationship will develop.
Hmm, I'm a little disappointed with how annoying you made Kairi be, but I don't think I'm nearly far enough in the story to be making any judgments. I actually really like Rikku and Cloud, though, and love the little CloudxLeon you threw in there as well. 3 I hope we'll get to see more of that. I love how you made the family famous, to put all that extra added stress on Roxas's recovery. I've never seen that done before. I also like the way you made Teier, all strict and respected and no-shit. I don't like how he treats Roxas, though. However, I think it's great for the story. I'm a little intrigued with Sabel, too. I have a feeling she's going to break out of her shell and stand up to her husband and be a kick-ass motherfucker sometime in the story. xD
Overall, I have high hopes for this story and I'm really excited to continue reading. All my reviews won't be this long and blabby, I promise! And it's weird, I sound so mature and old and I'm really only a teenager. I should make my reviews more fun, you think? xD
9/1/2013 c22 Sapphire-Songs
I'll have you know the beginning of this chapter cracked me up so much
Great story so far! I love how you developed Roxas' character. I give it at least one more day before I finished this
I'll have you know the beginning of this chapter cracked me up so much
Great story so far! I love how you developed Roxas' character. I give it at least one more day before I finished this
7/27/2013 c31 8superspreegirl89
Can I just say wow? WOW! 200k and you held my attention the entire time (hard to due with some fics). I loved it from start to finish. The development was great and I'm super excited for the sequel! When someone recommended this to me I was a bit skeptical since it was so long but dang were all my expectations CRUSHED! This was amazing! I bid you the best of luck with all of your writing and I will be adding this story to my top 5. :D
8superspreegirl89Can I just say wow? WOW! 200k and you held my attention the entire time (hard to due with some fics). I loved it from start to finish. The development was great and I'm super excited for the sequel! When someone recommended this to me I was a bit skeptical since it was so long but dang were all my expectations CRUSHED! This was amazing! I bid you the best of luck with all of your writing and I will be adding this story to my top 5. :D
7/18/2013 c2 ohFANfiction
ohymygosssh. i'm only on chapter to but just have to say that i LOVE the way you portrayed the characters. when i read fanfictions, i'm used to the characters being reaaaally outta character but i'm sooo glad that you made them act like how they seemed like they'd react. i love it. anyway, next chapter
ohymygosssh. i'm only on chapter to but just have to say that i LOVE the way you portrayed the characters. when i read fanfictions, i'm used to the characters being reaaaally outta character but i'm sooo glad that you made them act like how they seemed like they'd react. i love it. anyway, next chapter
7/8/2013 c31 1SerendipitousWhim
I’ve read this story a long time ago and loved it. I’m particularly madly in love with your Roxas; his retorts never cease to amuse me. I can’t put into words how dear this story is to me. I keep coming back to it and read different section of different chapters all the time. I saw there was a sequel but I’ll wait until it’s finished to read it. I can only hope it has the same quality as this story.
You’re a very talented writer and I wish you luck.
1SerendipitousWhimI’ve read this story a long time ago and loved it. I’m particularly madly in love with your Roxas; his retorts never cease to amuse me. I can’t put into words how dear this story is to me. I keep coming back to it and read different section of different chapters all the time. I saw there was a sequel but I’ll wait until it’s finished to read it. I can only hope it has the same quality as this story.
You’re a very talented writer and I wish you luck.
5/26/2013 c31 DreamingOfSasuNaru
For some odd reason I thought there were 46 chs in this story. I have no idea where that number came from so I was really confused when I read this ch and it sounded like an epilogue, cuz it was! Haha
Anyway, oh wow. I can't believe this story is over. This is definitely one of my fav stories of all time. The character development I think is the best I've ever read. it's amazing how much Roxas has changed throughout the story but it was at the perfect pace. The relationship development was really great too but it was a little too slow in the beginning and middle, and then too fast at the end. The plot was an extremely great idea, but I think it could've been executed a little bit better. Like the only thing with Xemnas was such a big deal in the beginning of the story but he was almost never mentioned for the rest. I really love the flashbacks in the beginning. They were a great touch. They were also a unique way of creating mysteries and revealing them. But I think the flashbacks should have played more into the rest of the story, not just the beginning. LIke it's strange that Roxas isn't scarred from Xemnas touching him inappropriately, like he doesn't mind doing sexual things. WHen people are sexually abused, they tend be afraid of sexual intercourse. Also, the whole reincarnation dream seemed almost out of place to me. There are a couple flaws in this story but overall, it truly is great. You are an amazing writer and I absolutely loved this story! Great development, angst, humor, and romance, my favorite combinations.
For some odd reason I thought there were 46 chs in this story. I have no idea where that number came from so I was really confused when I read this ch and it sounded like an epilogue, cuz it was! Haha
Anyway, oh wow. I can't believe this story is over. This is definitely one of my fav stories of all time. The character development I think is the best I've ever read. it's amazing how much Roxas has changed throughout the story but it was at the perfect pace. The relationship development was really great too but it was a little too slow in the beginning and middle, and then too fast at the end. The plot was an extremely great idea, but I think it could've been executed a little bit better. Like the only thing with Xemnas was such a big deal in the beginning of the story but he was almost never mentioned for the rest. I really love the flashbacks in the beginning. They were a great touch. They were also a unique way of creating mysteries and revealing them. But I think the flashbacks should have played more into the rest of the story, not just the beginning. LIke it's strange that Roxas isn't scarred from Xemnas touching him inappropriately, like he doesn't mind doing sexual things. WHen people are sexually abused, they tend be afraid of sexual intercourse. Also, the whole reincarnation dream seemed almost out of place to me. There are a couple flaws in this story but overall, it truly is great. You are an amazing writer and I absolutely loved this story! Great development, angst, humor, and romance, my favorite combinations.
5/26/2013 c30 DreamingOfSasuNaru
OMGOSHHH I CAN'T BELIEVE THEY WENT ALL THE WAYYY! The blow job was hawtttt haha. I like the tongue ring comment omg! But I thought it was sudden that they consumated their relationship. Also, there weren't many details!
OMGOSHHH I CAN'T BELIEVE THEY WENT ALL THE WAYYY! The blow job was hawtttt haha. I like the tongue ring comment omg! But I thought it was sudden that they consumated their relationship. Also, there weren't many details!
5/26/2013 c28 DreamingOfSasuNaru
Hahaha omgosh they just make me giggle. And I kept forgetting to mention this sooner but i LOVE sora and riku. The are just the cutest thing since puppies! Especially Sora. You should make a side story about them!
Hahaha omgosh they just make me giggle. And I kept forgetting to mention this sooner but i LOVE sora and riku. The are just the cutest thing since puppies! Especially Sora. You should make a side story about them!