for Inertia Creeps5/26/2013 c26 DreamingOfSasuNaru
Haha I like how this chapter was like a flashback. The ending was really powerful and cute. I'm so happy they're finally together! Woot woot. It took more than half of the story to get to this point but it was worth it
Haha I like how this chapter was like a flashback. The ending was really powerful and cute. I'm so happy they're finally together! Woot woot. It took more than half of the story to get to this point but it was worth it
5/25/2013 c24 DreamingOfSasuNaru
Oh my friggin goodness, I was CRACKING up at the "pushing" part hahaha. I totally expected Sora to misinterpret though lmao. Omgggg Axel saying that he wouldn't mind being in a relationship with Roxas furthers the relationship development! But I can't believe he'll be gone soon...I wonder what's going to happen...
Oh my friggin goodness, I was CRACKING up at the "pushing" part hahaha. I totally expected Sora to misinterpret though lmao. Omgggg Axel saying that he wouldn't mind being in a relationship with Roxas furthers the relationship development! But I can't believe he'll be gone soon...I wonder what's going to happen...
5/25/2013 c21 DreamingOfSasuNaru
The character development of Roxas is so nice...It really is amazing how much he's changed. And the scenes about Axel's dreams was really funny and cute haha
The character development of Roxas is so nice...It really is amazing how much he's changed. And the scenes about Axel's dreams was really funny and cute haha
5/25/2013 c20 DreamingOfSasuNaru
YESSS ! This chapter is like the turning point cuz it finally shows that Roxas has some kind of interest in Axel! Hehe
YESSS ! This chapter is like the turning point cuz it finally shows that Roxas has some kind of interest in Axel! Hehe
5/24/2013 c18 DreamingOfSasuNaru
Oh wow...that's so sad the way Hayner died. But very realistic because many teens overdose all the time :sad face: I like how Hayner and Axel's similar personalities is a good leeway for Axel and Roxas's future relationship. And the mystery of Marluxia was revealed too! Yay everything is finally unfolding
Oh wow...that's so sad the way Hayner died. But very realistic because many teens overdose all the time :sad face: I like how Hayner and Axel's similar personalities is a good leeway for Axel and Roxas's future relationship. And the mystery of Marluxia was revealed too! Yay everything is finally unfolding
5/24/2013 c17 DreamingOfSasuNaru
Wow the analogy with the trees was really creative and added a lot of meaning to this chapter. Yet another mystery with Muluxia...this story is so engaging! My only criticism is that it is a little long and slow. But i'm sure the wait will be worth it!
Wow the analogy with the trees was really creative and added a lot of meaning to this chapter. Yet another mystery with Muluxia...this story is so engaging! My only criticism is that it is a little long and slow. But i'm sure the wait will be worth it!
5/24/2013 c16 DreamingOfSasuNaru
The magazine really cracked me up for some reason. I love how there's so much angst and humor at the same time. Can't wait for the romance!
The magazine really cracked me up for some reason. I love how there's so much angst and humor at the same time. Can't wait for the romance!
5/24/2013 c15 DreamingOfSasuNaru
OMG I LITERALLY DIED AT THAT FLASHBACK WITH HAYNER! OMG THAT IS ONE OF THE CUTEST AND SADDEST THINGS I'VE EVER READ! I kind of expected it before when the picture was first mentioned but I was still really surprised when Hayner kissed him! Omg, it seemed like Roxas's molestation as a child was the only problem in this story, I totally did not expect another big thing of his past too. I love how this story was well thought out before hand. The development is great. you are seriously a really amazing writer
OMG I LITERALLY DIED AT THAT FLASHBACK WITH HAYNER! OMG THAT IS ONE OF THE CUTEST AND SADDEST THINGS I'VE EVER READ! I kind of expected it before when the picture was first mentioned but I was still really surprised when Hayner kissed him! Omg, it seemed like Roxas's molestation as a child was the only problem in this story, I totally did not expect another big thing of his past too. I love how this story was well thought out before hand. The development is great. you are seriously a really amazing writer
5/24/2013 c11 DreamingOfSasuNaru
Hmmm so much mystery with Larxene and Sora's hs friends! You're really building up the suspense, i love it.
Hmmm so much mystery with Larxene and Sora's hs friends! You're really building up the suspense, i love it.
5/24/2013 c10 DreamingOfSasuNaru
Awwwww poor Roxas...you really captured his feelings so well. The ending was soo sweet
Awwwww poor Roxas...you really captured his feelings so well. The ending was soo sweet