
9/27/2008 c2 AnimeFallingStar
Thank you for changing the sad ending to a happy one. Sad endings make me cry. Happy endings make me smile. Smiles are good. Thanks! I just had to get that out of my system. I really liked the last line, it was such a wonderful metaphor. I liked the way you portrayed it when Roy thought about love- it was so different than most Royai fics when he does. (wow, that's one messed-up, needs-to-be-edited sentence. But you get the point)
This is really good!
Thank you for changing the sad ending to a happy one. Sad endings make me cry. Happy endings make me smile. Smiles are good. Thanks! I just had to get that out of my system. I really liked the last line, it was such a wonderful metaphor. I liked the way you portrayed it when Roy thought about love- it was so different than most Royai fics when he does. (wow, that's one messed-up, needs-to-be-edited sentence. But you get the point)
This is really good!
12/29/2007 c2
18Fantasy Fan Girl
Ya! A semi happy ending. The story was good and pretty realistic. Keep writing.
Fantasy Fan Girl

Ya! A semi happy ending. The story was good and pretty realistic. Keep writing.
Fantasy Fan Girl
12/20/2007 c2
2SilentKiller1
oh cool. he is not an ass. he does care about her. fianlly. wish it will happen in the manga

oh cool. he is not an ass. he does care about her. fianlly. wish it will happen in the manga
12/15/2007 c1
25Pickles the Great
I think I'm gonna cry a little bit... great writing... *sniffle*
~Pickles

I think I'm gonna cry a little bit... great writing... *sniffle*
~Pickles