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9/27/2008 c2 AnimeFallingStar
Thank you for changing the sad ending to a happy one. Sad endings make me cry. Happy endings make me smile. Smiles are good. Thanks! I just had to get that out of my system. I really liked the last line, it was such a wonderful metaphor. I liked the way you portrayed it when Roy thought about love- it was so different than most Royai fics when he does. (wow, that's one messed-up, needs-to-be-edited sentence. But you get the point)

This is really good!
12/29/2007 c2 18Fantasy Fan Girl
Ya! A semi happy ending. The story was good and pretty realistic. Keep writing.

Fantasy Fan Girl
12/20/2007 c2 2SilentKiller1
oh cool. he is not an ass. he does care about her. fianlly. wish it will happen in the manga
12/20/2007 c1 SilentKiller1
intersting but sad as well. dont like sad too much
12/17/2007 c2 1sniperalchemist
amazing...im crying...i cant stop..T_T AMAZING!
12/15/2007 c1 25Pickles the Great
I think I'm gonna cry a little bit... great writing... *sniffle*

~Pickles
12/15/2007 c1 27Anne Packrat
This is good, you set up the scene and characters well.

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