for Flowers in Winter2/17/2008 c17 makya
wow even if it is short its beautiful. This chapter conveys a lot even in so few words its really interesting to see how one event can force their relationship to evolve so much.
wow even if it is short its beautiful. This chapter conveys a lot even in so few words its really interesting to see how one event can force their relationship to evolve so much.
2/17/2008 c17 
3Snape's Only 1
Ok, before I get "hunted down" I think I'll leave a review, lol. This chapter was like a teaser chapter; it was so short. Very good, but very short. I can't wait to find out what happens when Hermione regains some of her composure and realizes she was in Snape's arms all night. That will be intersting.
3Snape's Only 1Ok, before I get "hunted down" I think I'll leave a review, lol. This chapter was like a teaser chapter; it was so short. Very good, but very short. I can't wait to find out what happens when Hermione regains some of her composure and realizes she was in Snape's arms all night. That will be intersting.
2/10/2008 c16 65notwritten
Very nice chapter it is today. Keep smiling and writing till the sun shines. :-)
65notwrittenVery nice chapter it is today. Keep smiling and writing till the sun shines. :-)
2/10/2008 c16 66debjunk
Wow, that was awesome. I liked the thought processes of Mr. Granger. Very realistic.
66debjunkWow, that was awesome. I liked the thought processes of Mr. Granger. Very realistic.
2/10/2008 c16 3Snape's Only 1
That was very dakr, but also very good. I could picture everything almost as if it were happening to me. Very realistic, Please update soon, although by the time you read this, you will have probably posted another chapter.
3Snape's Only 1That was very dakr, but also very good. I could picture everything almost as if it were happening to me. Very realistic, Please update soon, although by the time you read this, you will have probably posted another chapter.
2/2/2008 c15 Snape's Only 1
Ok, I just read all fifteen chapters, so if I get some details out of place please forgive me. At first I was confused about what time period this story was in. Your comment at the beginning of one of the chapters made this part clear though. I think you have Hermione's character down very well, but I am questioning a couple things about Snape. Why does he react so terribly to pain when Harry, who was hit by the exact same curse in GOF, only panted and ached for awhile? Does it have to do with the amount of times someone is crucioed? Like in the case of the Longbottoms? Also, is their any hidden meaning behind Snape's rose garden. The lily garden makes complete sense, but Snape just doesn't strike me as a rose type of man. However, you are 100% entitled to write these characters as you see them.
I loved chapter 13. It seemed so realiztic for the two of them. It was lusty but not overdone or inappropriate. Writing a chapter like that one truly takes talent.
I can't wait to find out what happens. I know they will eventually kiss and then start some kind of relationship, but when I thought that was going to happen Dumbledore came along and ruined it, lol. That definitely keeps me wanting more.
Great job so far. Please update soon.
Ok, I just read all fifteen chapters, so if I get some details out of place please forgive me. At first I was confused about what time period this story was in. Your comment at the beginning of one of the chapters made this part clear though. I think you have Hermione's character down very well, but I am questioning a couple things about Snape. Why does he react so terribly to pain when Harry, who was hit by the exact same curse in GOF, only panted and ached for awhile? Does it have to do with the amount of times someone is crucioed? Like in the case of the Longbottoms? Also, is their any hidden meaning behind Snape's rose garden. The lily garden makes complete sense, but Snape just doesn't strike me as a rose type of man. However, you are 100% entitled to write these characters as you see them.
I loved chapter 13. It seemed so realiztic for the two of them. It was lusty but not overdone or inappropriate. Writing a chapter like that one truly takes talent.
I can't wait to find out what happens. I know they will eventually kiss and then start some kind of relationship, but when I thought that was going to happen Dumbledore came along and ruined it, lol. That definitely keeps me wanting more.
Great job so far. Please update soon.
1/29/2008 c15 7ZemISHly
I like the whole short chapter thing. I'm so lazy...you write hermione really well, it's like natural. Kinda like I could evision the whole thing happening. I cringed on chapter 12.
7ZemISHlyI like the whole short chapter thing. I'm so lazy...you write hermione really well, it's like natural. Kinda like I could evision the whole thing happening. I cringed on chapter 12.
1/28/2008 c15 megg
This chapter was very iteresting because it was the first glimpse of the Dark Lord. He seems very strong in the cruel departmen tbut hios language is too vulgar for a "Lord". Severus' memories are as usual, fabulous, you do great flashbacks!
This chapter was very iteresting because it was the first glimpse of the Dark Lord. He seems very strong in the cruel departmen tbut hios language is too vulgar for a "Lord". Severus' memories are as usual, fabulous, you do great flashbacks!
1/27/2008 c15 3EruthiadwenGreenleaf
You did a wonderful job on this chapter! I love the beginning of it...such detail. Wonderful! Please update soon! Looking forward to reading more :)
Tish
3EruthiadwenGreenleafYou did a wonderful job on this chapter! I love the beginning of it...such detail. Wonderful! Please update soon! Looking forward to reading more :)
Tish
1/27/2008 c15 5Harlequin de Rustre
Alright! A good cliffhanger! Too bad it was all that was there...
By all rights, Good Night!
5Harlequin de RustreAlright! A good cliffhanger! Too bad it was all that was there...
By all rights, Good Night!
1/27/2008 c14 Harlequin de Rustre
Good work, it's truly a masterpiece. If only you weren't breathing down my neck, sis, I'd be more expressive.
You still need to actually look over your works at least once afterwards, so all your mistakes are gone. It's still great, but it's not impeccable.
Anyway, Good Day.
AND READ MY FICS FOR ONCE!
Good work, it's truly a masterpiece. If only you weren't breathing down my neck, sis, I'd be more expressive.
You still need to actually look over your works at least once afterwards, so all your mistakes are gone. It's still great, but it's not impeccable.
Anyway, Good Day.
AND READ MY FICS FOR ONCE!