
1/10/2008 c14 A. nonomous
I will review and then go cry. He will give a "Clean death?" Not enough. That is so upsetting. Please give us more on future tsuff. Please excuse me while I blow my nose. *sniffle*sniffle*
I will review and then go cry. He will give a "Clean death?" Not enough. That is so upsetting. Please give us more on future tsuff. Please excuse me while I blow my nose. *sniffle*sniffle*
1/10/2008 c13 A. nonomous
OH tense I really love it. Good Snape-itude.Anyway awesome!
OH tense I really love it. Good Snape-itude.Anyway awesome!
1/10/2008 c12 A. nonomous
This was one of my favorite chaptersso far because of the realness. The Ron and Harry part is pretty funny and very good. The occulemency was intense but i loved the distinct difference between Harry and Hermione's lessons. Anyway, evil cliffie. lol:P
This was one of my favorite chaptersso far because of the realness. The Ron and Harry part is pretty funny and very good. The occulemency was intense but i loved the distinct difference between Harry and Hermione's lessons. Anyway, evil cliffie. lol:P
1/10/2008 c11 A. nonomous
I love Hermione's questions. We all have a person whose sanity is always questioned when they leave cryptic notes. Anyway cool chapter.
I love Hermione's questions. We all have a person whose sanity is always questioned when they leave cryptic notes. Anyway cool chapter.
1/10/2008 c10 A. nonomous
Hey I'm sorry i haen't reviewed in so long. I didn't abandon this story. My computer was messed up. Anyway, I will pick up here. First, thanks for the dedication, it means a lot to me. Now, I love the vulnerability. The occlumency leson sounds cool though. Can't wait to read it. Great chapter!
Hey I'm sorry i haen't reviewed in so long. I didn't abandon this story. My computer was messed up. Anyway, I will pick up here. First, thanks for the dedication, it means a lot to me. Now, I love the vulnerability. The occlumency leson sounds cool though. Can't wait to read it. Great chapter!
1/6/2008 c14
65notwritten
This chapter is very interesting. Can we have more interesting chapters please. Keep smiling all the day long, and all through the night, with a song in you heart. :-)

This chapter is very interesting. Can we have more interesting chapters please. Keep smiling all the day long, and all through the night, with a song in you heart. :-)
1/6/2008 c14 makya
oh gosh this is hypnotic. I really can't wait for more. Hermione's character seems to be maturing and its always interesting to see the other sides of severus can't wait for more!
oh gosh this is hypnotic. I really can't wait for more. Hermione's character seems to be maturing and its always interesting to see the other sides of severus can't wait for more!
1/6/2008 c14
66debjunk
Exciting chapter. Not cheesy at all. Is there any hope of saving her parents? I liked the end, I could really feel Severus' agony.

Exciting chapter. Not cheesy at all. Is there any hope of saving her parents? I liked the end, I could really feel Severus' agony.
1/6/2008 c14
7Siriusluver-le
Wonderfully not cheesy as usual. But now I'm all keyed up. Sev is going to be alright, right?

Wonderfully not cheesy as usual. But now I'm all keyed up. Sev is going to be alright, right?
1/6/2008 c12 patatepoil
Funny you don't like it, because I really liked it! I was longer, as more description, more talking and some funny comments, like the "period thing".
Funny you don't like it, because I really liked it! I was longer, as more description, more talking and some funny comments, like the "period thing".
1/6/2008 c11 patatepoil
Wow you're quick on the anwering back! :P
I'm still reading your story! ;)
Ok this chapter is kind of a between chapter of what I really want to read "the Occlumency lesson"... So... I'll review next chapter! :P
Wow you're quick on the anwering back! :P
I'm still reading your story! ;)
Ok this chapter is kind of a between chapter of what I really want to read "the Occlumency lesson"... So... I'll review next chapter! :P