10/12/2009 c1 Megan
You truly love Sanpe. This is possibly my favorite of your poems because it is accurate well-written and really touching. I kinda wanna cry which doesn't always happen with poetry. Great job!
You truly love Sanpe. This is possibly my favorite of your poems because it is accurate well-written and really touching. I kinda wanna cry which doesn't always happen with poetry. Great job!
1/31/2008 c1 3Snape's Only 1
This is beautiful. I can almost picture Severus sitting in his dark office writing this by the flickering light of a candle, and sotring the parchment in some kind of sexret compartment in his desk. You have his character down perfectly.
This is beautiful. I can almost picture Severus sitting in his dark office writing this by the flickering light of a candle, and sotring the parchment in some kind of sexret compartment in his desk. You have his character down perfectly.
1/29/2008 c1 7ZemISHly
omg I love that. It so good, i's like sad and sweet at the same time. Your an excellent writer!
omg I love that. It so good, i's like sad and sweet at the same time. Your an excellent writer!
12/19/2007 c1 A. nonomous
Before i even start guessing, let me just say that this is my favorite poem. I tis interesting and seems to tell a story right up until the end, where it is almost left open-ended. Great!
Anyway, my guess is Severus is thinking about Lily, and the one mistake that insured she'd never be his.
Before i even start guessing, let me just say that this is my favorite poem. I tis interesting and seems to tell a story right up until the end, where it is almost left open-ended. Great!
Anyway, my guess is Severus is thinking about Lily, and the one mistake that insured she'd never be his.