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for he had always been there

11/13/2010 c1 Sakuya
*nose bleed* *drool*really, really, REALLY HOT!
11/19/2009 c1 1JustCallMeWhatever
lol

naruto's a pimp...lol

GREAT one-shot, yeah

short but good!
8/5/2009 c1 1blah4123
The story itself was good however you spelt ALOT of things wrong, when you write your stories you should use spell check or something and re-read your work before you publish it.

But apart from that i thought the story was awesome =D
4/13/2008 c1 kaeli-ileak
yea u spelt a LOT of words wrong, just to name a few:
ramen
kami (not karma)
oh
for
and a bunch of others i dont remember.
3/26/2008 c1 1KakyoKazukiLover
Ramen : 3

RAMON WTF. xD

Phail.
2/3/2008 c1 avelynn52794
That was an awesome story.^^

The last part was funny too.

Keep writing.^/^
1/4/2008 c1 1The Cries On Echo Mountain
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