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I felt so smart i knew who the canon son was. haha :) So this is really another lovely poem although do you think Dumbledore thinks like this without his crazy riddles and half-answers? If he does, it would make understanding him easier. Anyway, great job, looking forward to more poetry!
I felt so smart i knew who the canon son was. haha :) So this is really another lovely poem although do you think Dumbledore thinks like this without his crazy riddles and half-answers? If he does, it would make understanding him easier. Anyway, great job, looking forward to more poetry!
12/31/2007 c1 
47Kyer
I like it except for this: too many sentences that start with 'for'. Not even 'fore' or 'four', no, but four 'for's!
(There, how's that for a bit of patent snarkyness? (lol)
Really, though, maybe switch some out for a 'Yet' or something to break it up a bit more? (friendly smile)
47KyerI like it except for this: too many sentences that start with 'for'. Not even 'fore' or 'four', no, but four 'for's!
(There, how's that for a bit of patent snarkyness? (lol)
Really, though, maybe switch some out for a 'Yet' or something to break it up a bit more? (friendly smile)
12/19/2007 c1 A. nonomous
That is absolutely beautiful.
Your wording is excellent and your maning truly sweet. Great job!
That is absolutely beautiful.
Your wording is excellent and your maning truly sweet. Great job!
12/18/2007 c1 Onua Wingstar
I really, really like this. Oh, Dumbledore...I'll bet the one thing he really longed for in life was a child of his own.
If he and Gellert had adopted, they would have been great parents, I think. :) So sad...
I really, really like this. Oh, Dumbledore...I'll bet the one thing he really longed for in life was a child of his own.
If he and Gellert had adopted, they would have been great parents, I think. :) So sad...