for Have You Ever8/22/2012 c1 AngyHitsu
Wow I never imagined that toshiro take the lead like that and kissed Ichigo, I liked the story, difinitivamente this couple is the best bleach. :D
Wow I never imagined that toshiro take the lead like that and kissed Ichigo, I liked the story, difinitivamente this couple is the best bleach. :D
12/17/2010 c1 
13Nessie-san
KAWAII! Gokuro-sama, Nush-san ^-^ It was so cute! Also, though, it's just shounen-ai, not yaoi. I noticed in the description it had both ^-^ It was too short to really have anything to give notes on, except for one thing which seems to be a repetitive problem in your writing: Possessives have an apostrophe before the "S," otherwise it's a plural. (excepting the case of its and a few other weird ones) Awesome story, though. Totemo kawaii desu ^-^
13Nessie-sanKAWAII! Gokuro-sama, Nush-san ^-^ It was so cute! Also, though, it's just shounen-ai, not yaoi. I noticed in the description it had both ^-^ It was too short to really have anything to give notes on, except for one thing which seems to be a repetitive problem in your writing: Possessives have an apostrophe before the "S," otherwise it's a plural. (excepting the case of its and a few other weird ones) Awesome story, though. Totemo kawaii desu ^-^
9/28/2009 c1 14Faith Valconbridge
oh yay another brilliant one from you! SHORT AND SWEET AND SO VERY CUTE/ XD
14Faith Valconbridgeoh yay another brilliant one from you! SHORT AND SWEET AND SO VERY CUTE/ XD
12/9/2008 c1 Eswarah
Kawai :D *giggle* well in fact it WAS short, but definitely good :D I agree that making Shiro-chan a bit "active" was a good move ;) I'm looking forward to your next IchiHitsu ;) I'm addicted to them I won't deny it:D
Kawai :D *giggle* well in fact it WAS short, but definitely good :D I agree that making Shiro-chan a bit "active" was a good move ;) I'm looking forward to your next IchiHitsu ;) I'm addicted to them I won't deny it:D