
1/20/2008 c10 teacher123
I loved the story. I like the way the Weasley's accepted Scorpious even though he is a Malfoy. Draco needs to grow up. :)
I loved the story. I like the way the Weasley's accepted Scorpious even though he is a Malfoy. Draco needs to grow up. :)
1/20/2008 c10 AmeliaLouise
VEry clever, i like the idea of Narcissa wanting to be in ravenclaw that put an interesting spin on it. i think scorpius is so cute and i love how the cousins all stand up for him. love it as usual. xx
VEry clever, i like the idea of Narcissa wanting to be in ravenclaw that put an interesting spin on it. i think scorpius is so cute and i love how the cousins all stand up for him. love it as usual. xx
1/20/2008 c10
40Historybuff1536
This is the best next Gen Fanfic I've ever read. I'm serious. I bet I've read every one on and this is the best one. :)
One little mistake I saw, Scorpius middle name is: Hyperion
Poor kid.

This is the best next Gen Fanfic I've ever read. I'm serious. I bet I've read every one on and this is the best one. :)
One little mistake I saw, Scorpius middle name is: Hyperion
Poor kid.
1/20/2008 c10
4Cassandra's Cross
Looks like Draco is every bit as much of a git as ever, albeit a more subdued git. Narcissa is right, that boy doesn't learn, does he? Am I catching a hint of a possible reconciliation between Andromeda & Narcissa? I feel bad for Scorpius, though at least he has his mother and grandmother to ease his way a bit. This was utterly compelling. I can't wait for more!

Looks like Draco is every bit as much of a git as ever, albeit a more subdued git. Narcissa is right, that boy doesn't learn, does he? Am I catching a hint of a possible reconciliation between Andromeda & Narcissa? I feel bad for Scorpius, though at least he has his mother and grandmother to ease his way a bit. This was utterly compelling. I can't wait for more!
1/20/2008 c10
3AmazingBouncingFerret445
this chapter was good.. but for some reason i didn't like it as much as the others. maybe its just because it was shorter. or maybe the conversation with narcissa went differently than i was expecting. anyway, i still liked it. it was just different. update soon! :D

this chapter was good.. but for some reason i didn't like it as much as the others. maybe its just because it was shorter. or maybe the conversation with narcissa went differently than i was expecting. anyway, i still liked it. it was just different. update soon! :D
1/16/2008 c9
8bkwrmgrl87
I really really love this story! I hope you write very soon! I've read your stories on Fiction Alley but then I saw Peace and Flying on the JUST ADDED page and clicked on your authors link and found that the next chapter of Firewhiskey Advice was posted here! I really like your writing, you can actually spell and keep everyone in characters in for the most part. When I read about Scorpious, I keep being vividly reminded of Harry as he was growing up. The whole harassment thing and Scorpious refusing going to any teacher for one, just like with Harry and Umbridge! Really great story! And I LOVED the whole Christmas chapters especially! I can't wait to read the next chapter of this story! ~bkwrmgrl87

I really really love this story! I hope you write very soon! I've read your stories on Fiction Alley but then I saw Peace and Flying on the JUST ADDED page and clicked on your authors link and found that the next chapter of Firewhiskey Advice was posted here! I really like your writing, you can actually spell and keep everyone in characters in for the most part. When I read about Scorpious, I keep being vividly reminded of Harry as he was growing up. The whole harassment thing and Scorpious refusing going to any teacher for one, just like with Harry and Umbridge! Really great story! And I LOVED the whole Christmas chapters especially! I can't wait to read the next chapter of this story! ~bkwrmgrl87
1/16/2008 c9
5WenchElle
Hm. I like this one a lot. Especially since most of your others are about Harry and Ginny, and these are more about the next generation.
ps...technicality, i know, but Crabbe died in the fiendyfire[sp?] at the end of the last book. =] sorry to be obnoxious but its the only constructive critisism i think ive ever left haha.

Hm. I like this one a lot. Especially since most of your others are about Harry and Ginny, and these are more about the next generation.
ps...technicality, i know, but Crabbe died in the fiendyfire[sp?] at the end of the last book. =] sorry to be obnoxious but its the only constructive critisism i think ive ever left haha.
1/16/2008 c9
24Princess Gillybean
What a lovely chapter. Nice characterization and good writing too(always inportant). You have a good sense of the way a close family sticks together which I really like. I hope Al's suspicions are true...eventually anyway.

What a lovely chapter. Nice characterization and good writing too(always inportant). You have a good sense of the way a close family sticks together which I really like. I hope Al's suspicions are true...eventually anyway.
1/15/2008 c9 blackolives10
This was lovely, as it always is. I really liked the interaction between Al and Scorpius. One question, though: wasn't Crabbe killed in the final battle? The fire in the Room of Requirement burned him to death.
This was lovely, as it always is. I really liked the interaction between Al and Scorpius. One question, though: wasn't Crabbe killed in the final battle? The fire in the Room of Requirement burned him to death.
1/15/2008 c9 freespirit85
yayy, another chapter! really liked it by the way. oh darn, lucious is dead. how sad. anyway, i like how you're showing more of scorpious. because it's not just questions that the potters and weasleys have about their own family past, but about the people around them. so i think it's cool how we're going to find out more about scorpious' relationship with draco. i can't wait to read more
yayy, another chapter! really liked it by the way. oh darn, lucious is dead. how sad. anyway, i like how you're showing more of scorpious. because it's not just questions that the potters and weasleys have about their own family past, but about the people around them. so i think it's cool how we're going to find out more about scorpious' relationship with draco. i can't wait to read more
1/15/2008 c9 DaphneD
Poor Scorpius. In a twisted way he's suffering for the sins of his father and grandfather.
You killed Lucius the luscious !
I couldn't help myself to feel sorry both for Lucius and for Narcissa. Narcissa's relief after Lucius's demise was so saddening.
Great chapter!
Poor Scorpius. In a twisted way he's suffering for the sins of his father and grandfather.
You killed Lucius the luscious !
I couldn't help myself to feel sorry both for Lucius and for Narcissa. Narcissa's relief after Lucius's demise was so saddening.
Great chapter!
1/15/2008 c8
40Historybuff1536
Oh I forgot to to tell you something.
I see that you are hinting a L/S Ship and if you want, You can actually make Lily a year older and it would still work. You can have her birthday fall after school would start, so she would be like Hermione and have to start a year late. But yea, thats just so their age would be a bit closer together. So it's not as weird. :P But thats just if you wanted to, if you don't just ignore me. :)

Oh I forgot to to tell you something.
I see that you are hinting a L/S Ship and if you want, You can actually make Lily a year older and it would still work. You can have her birthday fall after school would start, so she would be like Hermione and have to start a year late. But yea, thats just so their age would be a bit closer together. So it's not as weird. :P But thats just if you wanted to, if you don't just ignore me. :)
1/15/2008 c9 Historybuff1536
WOW! I found this and I had to read the whole thing. I'm an American, so this might sound a little funny coming from me, but, that was bloody brillant!
Please for the love of God update soon.
:)
WOW! I found this and I had to read the whole thing. I'm an American, so this might sound a little funny coming from me, but, that was bloody brillant!
Please for the love of God update soon.
:)