
12/27/2007 c5
4Cassandra's Cross
Al is the wise one in the family, isn't he? I think he may have inherited a little of his namesake's philosophical bent, despite the lack of a blood tie. "You're my mum and dad." That says it all, doesn't it? I think you write family relationships very realistically and poignantly. This is my favorite chapter so far. Can't wait for the next!

Al is the wise one in the family, isn't he? I think he may have inherited a little of his namesake's philosophical bent, despite the lack of a blood tie. "You're my mum and dad." That says it all, doesn't it? I think you write family relationships very realistically and poignantly. This is my favorite chapter so far. Can't wait for the next!
12/27/2007 c4
8Respitini
The Q&A session was great. But the best part of this chapter, hands down, is the bit between Scorpius and Teddy. Heartbreakingly touching.

The Q&A session was great. But the best part of this chapter, hands down, is the bit between Scorpius and Teddy. Heartbreakingly touching.
12/23/2007 c3
4Cassandra's Cross
This is an interesting little story. I don't know that Harry and the Weasleys wouldn't have said anything to the kids about their roles in the war, nor do I think it's realistic that all the children would have remained completely ignorant up until this point, but you've done a terrific job of characterizing these second generation offspring. I'm particularly intrigued by Scorpius. I feel very sorry for him and actually like him, which I never thought I would feel for a Malfoy. Anyway, I'm intrigued and look forward to your next update.

This is an interesting little story. I don't know that Harry and the Weasleys wouldn't have said anything to the kids about their roles in the war, nor do I think it's realistic that all the children would have remained completely ignorant up until this point, but you've done a terrific job of characterizing these second generation offspring. I'm particularly intrigued by Scorpius. I feel very sorry for him and actually like him, which I never thought I would feel for a Malfoy. Anyway, I'm intrigued and look forward to your next update.
12/23/2007 c3
2Elf-of-Sunlight
Hello there!
I really hope you continue with this story, I love all second generation things.
I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Elf-of-Sunlight

Hello there!
I really hope you continue with this story, I love all second generation things.
I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Elf-of-Sunlight
12/22/2007 c3 blackolives10
It was interesting to read about Draco's Mark. I hadn't even thought about what that might seem like to a little kid.
It was interesting to read about Draco's Mark. I hadn't even thought about what that might seem like to a little kid.
12/19/2007 c1 blackolives10
I really like the beginning of this and I'm excited to see what you do with the idea.
I really like the beginning of this and I'm excited to see what you do with the idea.
12/19/2007 c1 minerdude
Good story. Can't wait to see how Victoire does not know, since I guess she is in 6th or 7th year.
Good story. Can't wait to see how Victoire does not know, since I guess she is in 6th or 7th year.
12/18/2007 c1
8AnkouBlake
I like it so far. Can't wait for the next. Interesting turn, putting Scorpius into Gryffindor.

I like it so far. Can't wait for the next. Interesting turn, putting Scorpius into Gryffindor.