for One Long Week3/11/2015 c8 
2livintoinspire
OKAY... SO, I HAVE A LOT TO SAY TO YOU! (Don't worry your pretty little head it's all positive! ;)
So first off, when I went to check the link in your bio and found the "Amazing discovery" it lead me to play hours of beautiful SasuNaru dating flash games on deviantart XD I didn't even know people made those! I was so happy! Without you and this fic I wouldn't have found them! So thank you!
Also, HOW COME NO ONE EVER THOUGHT OF "SEME- I MEAN TEME"!? I mean, come on! The words are so similar and I hate myself for never even thinking of that! Arrghh! But again, thank you so much for introduing me to such a new (and I'll be using it in everyday life now) and amazing concept! :DDD I also really enjoyed this story and it made me smile all throughout! It had such a heartwarming ending and as an avaid FF reader, I'm so happy I clicked onto this story :)
You should be proud of this as it's a genuinley good story and deserved all the praise it got 3 Thanks so much for all your hard work!
Sincerely, just another SasuNaru, yaoi fangirl
2livintoinspireOKAY... SO, I HAVE A LOT TO SAY TO YOU! (Don't worry your pretty little head it's all positive! ;)
So first off, when I went to check the link in your bio and found the "Amazing discovery" it lead me to play hours of beautiful SasuNaru dating flash games on deviantart XD I didn't even know people made those! I was so happy! Without you and this fic I wouldn't have found them! So thank you!
Also, HOW COME NO ONE EVER THOUGHT OF "SEME- I MEAN TEME"!? I mean, come on! The words are so similar and I hate myself for never even thinking of that! Arrghh! But again, thank you so much for introduing me to such a new (and I'll be using it in everyday life now) and amazing concept! :DDD I also really enjoyed this story and it made me smile all throughout! It had such a heartwarming ending and as an avaid FF reader, I'm so happy I clicked onto this story :)
You should be proud of this as it's a genuinley good story and deserved all the praise it got 3 Thanks so much for all your hard work!
Sincerely, just another SasuNaru, yaoi fangirl
9/21/2013 c9 cellaria
lol ok well if you're 13 then it was better but i have to say the beginning/middle chapters were much better than the end. should've kept it more realistic/serious instead of all the jokes/different voices in their heads etc. the story was okay at first but seemed to feel pretty rushed & get way off track there in the last half with too much random happenings & dialogue that were really distracting & took away from the story. i think you could've spent more time on the in between stages, just the daily routines, working on the mission etc.. you should've just gone with the idea that kakashi gave them a simple mission alone so they could work out their feelings instead of all that extra craziness lol still there was definitely potential & some really cute parts :)
lol ok well if you're 13 then it was better but i have to say the beginning/middle chapters were much better than the end. should've kept it more realistic/serious instead of all the jokes/different voices in their heads etc. the story was okay at first but seemed to feel pretty rushed & get way off track there in the last half with too much random happenings & dialogue that were really distracting & took away from the story. i think you could've spent more time on the in between stages, just the daily routines, working on the mission etc.. you should've just gone with the idea that kakashi gave them a simple mission alone so they could work out their feelings instead of all that extra craziness lol still there was definitely potential & some really cute parts :)
5/7/2013 c7 nsjevsj
You trolled me more than kishi did
You trolled me more than kishi did
12/17/2012 c1 Livy.Uzumaki.Obsessed
Hmmmmm *squeals like a school girl* This...just got interesting ;-3 teme sounds a LOT like seme...wait...Narutos thinking of letting Sasuke top him? Haha embarrassiiiiing 3 I like this very much so far
Hmmmmm *squeals like a school girl* This...just got interesting ;-3 teme sounds a LOT like seme...wait...Narutos thinking of letting Sasuke top him? Haha embarrassiiiiing 3 I like this very much so far
2/25/2012 c8 TaeMint
This was perfect 3
It's almost 2 AM now, and tomorrow I have an important test.
I think I should go to sleep. And study a litte.
This was perfect 3
It's almost 2 AM now, and tomorrow I have an important test.
I think I should go to sleep. And study a litte.
7/21/2011 c3 2RainCloudFedarie
Wow this is SOOOOOOO funny.
'And then he exploded.'
I laughed so hard right then!
This is your first fanfiction? It's great as far as I've read!
Damn I wish I have the same courage as you...
I haven't even posted my first yet! Or maybe I'm just lazy...
IDK. OMG THE LEMON/LIME IS GOOD! Awesome for your first fic.
KEEP IT UP!
2RainCloudFedarieWow this is SOOOOOOO funny.
'And then he exploded.'
I laughed so hard right then!
This is your first fanfiction? It's great as far as I've read!
Damn I wish I have the same courage as you...
I haven't even posted my first yet! Or maybe I'm just lazy...
IDK. OMG THE LEMON/LIME IS GOOD! Awesome for your first fic.
KEEP IT UP!
5/13/2011 c9 Teagaan
EXCELLENT! I loved this storyy :D I'm not sure I liked how Iruka and Kakashi were acting throughout it, but I was really happy about how in character Sasuke and Naruto were :D WELL DONE :)
EXCELLENT! I loved this storyy :D I'm not sure I liked how Iruka and Kakashi were acting throughout it, but I was really happy about how in character Sasuke and Naruto were :D WELL DONE :)
5/10/2011 c5 10darkimmortalityS
Yo! *Salute* You have a facebook? *Grins* Then can you add me? you can search for 'Akai Hisa' or just search for my add... ~ X3
10darkimmortalitySYo! *Salute* You have a facebook? *Grins* Then can you add me? you can search for 'Akai Hisa' or just search for my add... ~ X3
5/9/2011 c8 Carmen la loca
hooray for jiraya my grandpa. love the story. Hot lemon
hooray for jiraya my grandpa. love the story. Hot lemon
5/1/2011 c9 noname00
I loved it
I loved it
4/15/2011 c8 Aonokioku
First just let me say love it love it love it. I was tempted to put that all in caps, but that's just annoying.
A hint (no offense intended) hallucionations CAN be auditory. Anything that isn't real that you see, hear, feel, smell, even taste is a hallucination. Just so you know :) I know cause im a psychology student and i learned about it... so... yeah. Love it
First just let me say love it love it love it. I was tempted to put that all in caps, but that's just annoying.
A hint (no offense intended) hallucionations CAN be auditory. Anything that isn't real that you see, hear, feel, smell, even taste is a hallucination. Just so you know :) I know cause im a psychology student and i learned about it... so... yeah. Love it