for Dragon of the leaf4/20/2012 c1 
1Kauris Azurai
If you rethink the idea a bit. rewrite this story with more detail and more thought to the plot- It could be a pretty good story.
1Kauris AzuraiIf you rethink the idea a bit. rewrite this story with more detail and more thought to the plot- It could be a pretty good story.
12/25/2007 c1 3Dragon Noir
interesting concept, i haven't played this mana game but i know enough of the mana world to understand the background; so is naruto a descendant of flammy? will he be the new wielder of the mana sword hinata the new mana priestess? or will she become the new mana knight and ride naruto *insert perverted giggles* hey i love naruhina, sue me ^^
3Dragon Noirinteresting concept, i haven't played this mana game but i know enough of the mana world to understand the background; so is naruto a descendant of flammy? will he be the new wielder of the mana sword hinata the new mana priestess? or will she become the new mana knight and ride naruto *insert perverted giggles* hey i love naruhina, sue me ^^
12/22/2007 c1 3cosmicfalcon
there you are! you finally posted it! it only took me threatning you with a painful death how many times? update soon :-) :-)
3cosmicfalconthere you are! you finally posted it! it only took me threatning you with a painful death how many times? update soon :-) :-)