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10/7/2012 c1 Vampirediariesrock1
Naruto is really oblivious when it comes to stuff about love(he doesn't know hinata loves him) but when it comes to fighting and stuff he is on that shit.(when he beat up neji cause he punched him when he was underground)
1/28/2012 c1 3cheeseandcrackersaregoodforyou
Hahaha! I found this story to be very sweet and funny. I liked the "Two hours, forty-five minutes, eight headaches, three diagrams, seven bottles of sake, and a puppet show later" bit, that was great. But I'm not sure how a puppet show would be useful...

Anyway, one mistake that I noticed in the story is that you wrote 'new' instead of 'knew'. This is a pretty common mistake and I only noticed it twice but you might still want to fix that up.

Anyhoo, well done! I really liked this story.
12/25/2011 c1 1Wolfess-Sanu
This one shot is well worded and the correct use of tense is fresh, especially for the few fics that I have read in the fandom. Naruto's thick skull is especially described well. I enjoyed the sub note on how long it took him to realize. It made me laugh.
9/28/2011 c1 1x.NaruHinaKiba.x
Hehe yay! A puppet show! you should have put a kiss in there! o3o
6/8/2011 c1 Madi
LOVE IT! Shikamaru has a very good point! lol!
11/2/2010 c1 crystalwolfberri
XD oh a puppet show! lol, hilarious oneshot! ;D
9/22/2010 c1 Polygrammar
omg this is phunny as shit! im laughing my ass off!
8/17/2010 c1 Shinobi Way87
Good story.My favorite part is the puppet show part.God knows the horrors the went on in that room...
1/1/2010 c1 39kireiscorner
that cracked me up so badly! u should totally add more to it!
10/5/2009 c1 Azreal7313
This story is so f*ing funny! Please continue! I, like many of your other readers, want to know what happens between Naruto and Hinata!
7/30/2009 c1 Sabry
That was SO freaking funny! I'm still laghing like HELL! Anyways, please continue. :D
5/23/2009 c1 readingandrelaxing

lil: dat wuz so funny i luv it

spring: totally! ih wow dat wuz awsome

lil: well

both: JA!
11/26/2008 c1 12creativesm75
8/18/2008 c1 Kasuchi Koichi
You really can't be mad at Naruto for being clueless. If you think about it, if someone had shown him love when he was younger he might have known about little Hinata feelings.
6/18/2008 c1 1EvanescentSoul

Jenny: guys what do u think?

Choji: FOOD

Neji: Work to do..

Jenny: party pooper

Hinata: *blush*

Sakura: LOL

Sikamaru: I still dn't get how he got chosen to be hkage and not me

Jenny: OMG shikamaru its so oviaus...

Sasuke; HN

Jenny: LOL


jenny; so cute LOL

Anyways i loved it KEEP IT UP YO ^_^
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