for Possession10/8/2014 c11 
1MarSette
wow..you've update again! wahh i really wonder how or when mikan will notice ruka's real attitude, he's so stinky ... and natsume and mikan romance I'M SO EXCITED, :p
1MarSettewow..you've update again! wahh i really wonder how or when mikan will notice ruka's real attitude, he's so stinky ... and natsume and mikan romance I'M SO EXCITED, :p
1/2/2012 c9 4RandomDalmatian326
I love your plot, I love how you kept the characters' personality, and I love how you change POVs. It's really obvious and it's nice.
:) Keep writing, I want to see MisakiXTsbasa and MikanXNatsume and maybe... HotaruXRuka?
Is that what you were shooting for? I hope Nobara gets over herself soon! (But you made her a great antagonist.. keke.)
I want the next chapter! :D
4RandomDalmatian326I love your plot, I love how you kept the characters' personality, and I love how you change POVs. It's really obvious and it's nice.
:) Keep writing, I want to see MisakiXTsbasa and MikanXNatsume and maybe... HotaruXRuka?
Is that what you were shooting for? I hope Nobara gets over herself soon! (But you made her a great antagonist.. keke.)
I want the next chapter! :D
1/2/2012 c9 28bickeringgibberish
I said you're fired." Natsume made sure her eyes were locked onto his as he spoke. Mikan stood a foot away from his desk and it greatly pleased him watching her confused and in panic.
-I was confused at the last part of the sentence. :|
I better make my move now." He picked up his coat and headed out for the door.
-missing an open quotation mark! LOL
Funny, Natsume still is a pervert! Nice update.
28bickeringgibberishI said you're fired." Natsume made sure her eyes were locked onto his as he spoke. Mikan stood a foot away from his desk and it greatly pleased him watching her confused and in panic.
-I was confused at the last part of the sentence. :|
I better make my move now." He picked up his coat and headed out for the door.
-missing an open quotation mark! LOL
Funny, Natsume still is a pervert! Nice update.