for Defense Association: Year One3/17/2014 c3 
4Melissa45
It seems like you updated but I can't find any changes.
While rereading the whole story I noticed the muggleborn packet's list of classes doesn't mention History and Divination. Could it be that Mcgonagall dislikes both so much she excluded them?!
4Melissa45It seems like you updated but I can't find any changes.
While rereading the whole story I noticed the muggleborn packet's list of classes doesn't mention History and Divination. Could it be that Mcgonagall dislikes both so much she excluded them?!
1/21/2014 c3 daniel seward
you have a very good start on this story please countine it to its end
you have a very good start on this story please countine it to its end
4/9/2013 c3 ThunderGod Stormbringer
I'm a liking how this goes, great crossovers, though I'm pretty sure he should have gone for a Pikachu..who could look like a cat:}
I'm a liking how this goes, great crossovers, though I'm pretty sure he should have gone for a Pikachu..who could look like a cat:}
3/18/2013 c3 Kakazu
Please do an update soon! Are you going to have Harry create more pokemon like he did with houndour? This is a really good story so far please do more soon.
Please do an update soon! Are you going to have Harry create more pokemon like he did with houndour? This is a really good story so far please do more soon.
11/5/2012 c3 1RedRangerBelt
This is a really cool story. Is Harry eventually going to get found out about having Shep there even if it's against the rules? Is Hedwig going to gain any Pokemon-like abilities and be able to do things besides just fly and use beak and claws as weapons? Is Harry going to reveal to anyone Shep's true nature or identity or whatever? Will anyone else get a partner like Shep or learn to be a ninja and use their magic like shinobi use chakra? P.S. THERE is a place, THEIR is possessive (their book/their friend), and THEY'RE is a contraction of they are, and isn't McGonagall only the deputy head until sixth year after Snape kills Dumbledore, not the actual Headmistress?
1RedRangerBeltThis is a really cool story. Is Harry eventually going to get found out about having Shep there even if it's against the rules? Is Hedwig going to gain any Pokemon-like abilities and be able to do things besides just fly and use beak and claws as weapons? Is Harry going to reveal to anyone Shep's true nature or identity or whatever? Will anyone else get a partner like Shep or learn to be a ninja and use their magic like shinobi use chakra? P.S. THERE is a place, THEIR is possessive (their book/their friend), and THEY'RE is a contraction of they are, and isn't McGonagall only the deputy head until sixth year after Snape kills Dumbledore, not the actual Headmistress?
6/1/2011 c3 3HonorGuard Ra
This is a great story and while I don't generally do noob reviews, I think think over two years of inactivity warrants one. That said, Update nao plox! :D Kthnxbai!
3HonorGuard RaThis is a great story and while I don't generally do noob reviews, I think think over two years of inactivity warrants one. That said, Update nao plox! :D Kthnxbai!
4/8/2011 c3 Mangal2012
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Update soon! I have no advice or recommendations to give. You're doing awesome all on your own! Dont give up now...err...then!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Update soon! I have no advice or recommendations to give. You're doing awesome all on your own! Dont give up now...err...then!
11/7/2010 c3 2ranma hibiki
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*clones a copy of shep for myself* so which ninja were you making sort of harry's mentor/idol? kakashi may have been mentioned but i dont see harry being late to everything, reading porn, and wearing a headband
=P
keep up the good work
2ranma hibiki_
*clones a copy of shep for myself* so which ninja were you making sort of harry's mentor/idol? kakashi may have been mentioned but i dont see harry being late to everything, reading porn, and wearing a headband
=P
keep up the good work