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8/21/2010 c3 5Twylyte
Good story. Pity you're not continuing it.

-Twy
8/6/2010 c3 2Bane WolfBlood
Really good please update soon!
7/26/2010 c3 7Pink the Legendary
Either you're deviously clever or just plain evil leaving the last chapter like that. I do hope to see it continued.
7/17/2010 c3 momocolady
good story
7/15/2010 c3 7My Solitude
This is quite an interesting chapter. I am really anticipating the next chapter.
7/4/2010 c3 Rikku The Scarred Dragon
Interesting story so far, need a few more chapters to it, though.
5/29/2010 c3 1BlackRose-FlowerofDeath
This is very interesting...I can't wait to see how this plays out!

BlackRose
5/27/2010 c3 6KaggyAlucardSesh
please update this story is one of the better ones
2/18/2010 c3 Nordvegr
When I rethink it, Ron is a fool. How could anyone expect a human, someone who has no experience with the magical world, to wrestle a magical being of immense physical strength?
11/24/2009 c3 22Kingdark
short but acceptable.
9/1/2009 c3 7Taeniaea
Great Story Plz Update It Soon
5/19/2009 c3 2BlackRoseFire
Tis promises to bea a very interesting story. Please update agin soon. I loved the idea and how you have written it.
3/1/2009 c3 1Lord Sia
Hmm...

I like these kind of stories, but the glaring plothole is the fact that the Dursley's wouldn't let their son watch silly cartoons about bloody freaks (Come on! Demons? All-Seeing Eyes? People breathing fire?), and, well, I'm not much for the Ninken (ninja-dog) concept. I've read fics with Harry recreating Shukaku several times, and the Sharingan, but with his Seal Mastery; puppetry? That has serious potential, I can see Harry blocking AK's while dropping DE's right and left. And Kikaich├╗? Shino's a given natural at Occlumency, probably a bit like werewolves; good luck "reading" a Hivemind. Jyuuken... Also awesome, especially if combined with puppetry. And let's not underestimate the Ino-Shika-Chou combo; he could wrestle Grawp, break necks with hands of darkness and Voldie, good luck with the link...

Awesome fic anyway, keep it coming!
2/15/2009 c3 3Shadow Zeranion
This looks like it was a good series. I'm disappointed that it looks like you stopped writing though... I would have liked to have seen more.
2/8/2009 c3 Elquenodebesernombrado
I like the history a lot

it could get ready the eyes and to create a bloodlines Sharingan or Byakugan

it upgrades soon. good-bye
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