for Defense Association: Year One1/22/2008 c3 
4hemotem
Good chapter thank you. What house are you going to put him into I do hope you don't put him into Grif or Slytherin Ravenclaw would be a good choice to make what he precives as a decent house. Thank you again and I do hope to see more soon.
Hemotem
4hemotemGood chapter thank you. What house are you going to put him into I do hope you don't put him into Grif or Slytherin Ravenclaw would be a good choice to make what he precives as a decent house. Thank you again and I do hope to see more soon.
Hemotem
1/22/2008 c3 9KaiPhoenix
I really liked this version of the train ride and the boats...I eagerly await your sorting scene
...and nice way for Harry to get Hedwig
9KaiPhoenixI really liked this version of the train ride and the boats...I eagerly await your sorting scene
...and nice way for Harry to get Hedwig
1/18/2008 c2 6tgobg
Wow, you really did a good job with this story and combining the two crossovers. I can't wait until more chapters come out and hope you dont abandon this story :p
6tgobgWow, you really did a good job with this story and combining the two crossovers. I can't wait until more chapters come out and hope you dont abandon this story :p
1/15/2008 c2 9KaiPhoenix
hm...I do like how you crossed it over with Naruto without making Harry too super powered and I really enjoyed the Pokemon addition..that's one of the harder ones, I think, to cross over without it coming across as too young or making Pokemon grow up too quickly...at least, from what I understand about the show
I also really liked Harry's intro into the Wizarding World by McGonagall, that isn't used as much as some others
9KaiPhoenixhm...I do like how you crossed it over with Naruto without making Harry too super powered and I really enjoyed the Pokemon addition..that's one of the harder ones, I think, to cross over without it coming across as too young or making Pokemon grow up too quickly...at least, from what I understand about the show
I also really liked Harry's intro into the Wizarding World by McGonagall, that isn't used as much as some others
1/14/2008 c2 11T. E. Rankin
great story, I relly like this type, and good crossover with Pokemon, I don't think I've ever read a good one of those, untill yours. Please update soon!
11T. E. Rankingreat story, I relly like this type, and good crossover with Pokemon, I don't think I've ever read a good one of those, untill yours. Please update soon!
1/13/2008 c2 hpfananita
Nice start to your story, I'm looking forward to reading about when harry realises nobody else at the school can do what he can.
Nice start to your story, I'm looking forward to reading about when harry realises nobody else at the school can do what he can.
1/4/2008 c2 tony
i love it...it seems realistic that a young boy would try to do the things that he sees on the tv. i hope you update soon!
i love it...it seems realistic that a young boy would try to do the things that he sees on the tv. i hope you update soon!
12/30/2007 c2 Morgan Daratrazanoff
Great story! Update soon! Fix Harry's eyes and have Harry become an animagus! Update soon!
Great story! Update soon! Fix Harry's eyes and have Harry become an animagus! Update soon!