for Dreams7/21/2008 c8 
2Saucebender
I love this story, and yes this chapter was quite a cliffhanger! Please continue to write, I'm putting it on my alert list. I need as many awesome Zutara stories as I can get after suffering through the finale. And this one rocks!
2SaucebenderI love this story, and yes this chapter was quite a cliffhanger! Please continue to write, I'm putting it on my alert list. I need as many awesome Zutara stories as I can get after suffering through the finale. And this one rocks!
7/11/2008 c8 1Pepipanda
Interesting story. I just read all 8 chapters and very sneaky Azula to not have Iroh there. Also, I'm glad they are seeing connections to the dreams. That's always fun(making the connections, not necessarily what they entail). I've noticed the little hints of Zutara and I like that. Not going too fast. But the cliffie! You have to get another chapter up here soon. I will review it!
1PepipandaInteresting story. I just read all 8 chapters and very sneaky Azula to not have Iroh there. Also, I'm glad they are seeing connections to the dreams. That's always fun(making the connections, not necessarily what they entail). I've noticed the little hints of Zutara and I like that. Not going too fast. But the cliffie! You have to get another chapter up here soon. I will review it!
7/11/2008 c8 14MaxRideNut
something weird going on with sentences and/or punctuation. Had to do a bunch of double-takes trying to figure out what things meant.
but it's still a good story and you need to UPDATE!
14MaxRideNutsomething weird going on with sentences and/or punctuation. Had to do a bunch of double-takes trying to figure out what things meant.
but it's still a good story and you need to UPDATE!
6/26/2008 c7 11StrawberryKris
Argh!
Where the hell is Iroh!
Great story by the way! Very in-character, which makes it believable. Very little typo errors, which keeps it flowing smoothly. Your descriptions are beautiful and detailed and I like that in a writer. Not to mention its a Zutara story- BIG THUMBS UP THERE! Haha!
Anyway keep it up, I hope to read some more soon!
Kris
11StrawberryKrisArgh!
Where the hell is Iroh!
Great story by the way! Very in-character, which makes it believable. Very little typo errors, which keeps it flowing smoothly. Your descriptions are beautiful and detailed and I like that in a writer. Not to mention its a Zutara story- BIG THUMBS UP THERE! Haha!
Anyway keep it up, I hope to read some more soon!
Kris
4/17/2008 c5 4Heaven and Earth
I'm curious about what will happen. Update when you can!
Heaven and Earth
4Heaven and EarthI'm curious about what will happen. Update when you can!
Heaven and Earth
2/17/2008 c3 4Guardian of Balance
Pretty good. It'd be nicer if you let the story go on longer with each chapter though. It's a good idea, but you need to let the story progress. I'm alerting it though, I wanna know what happens next!
4Guardian of BalancePretty good. It'd be nicer if you let the story go on longer with each chapter though. It's a good idea, but you need to let the story progress. I'm alerting it though, I wanna know what happens next!
1/3/2008 c1 ballet-vamps-rule
...i definantly liked it...even if i miss some of the avatar episodes so i don't know what's happening but its still good...almost as good as zombie chocolates...i know i'm crazy...everybody in this town is crazy...
...i definantly liked it...even if i miss some of the avatar episodes so i don't know what's happening but its still good...almost as good as zombie chocolates...i know i'm crazy...everybody in this town is crazy...
12/27/2007 c1 2brokenpassions
I liked this, it gave me shivers. Can't what to see what else you can do.
2brokenpassionsI liked this, it gave me shivers. Can't what to see what else you can do.