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4/13/2008 c1 2zutoph507
That was beautiful, dark and oh so satisfying.
1/17/2008 c1 7Rai Science
nice.
1/1/2008 c1 16storm-of-insanity
This was quite an entertaining and fast-paced read. I like the idea behind it but I think Zuko was a bit OTT. I think you could have done with a build up into what would send him into such a rage to kill. I know it's painfully obvious but it would have helped put Zuko a little more IC.
12/31/2007 c1 earth-style-fire
wowz,very dark. :P um,why doe she say "just like mother"? that creeps me out,he didn't kill his mother,but the ending was awsomely creepy,just the way i like it. XD

...but still...why?...
12/29/2007 c1 unknown
she deserved it.
12/28/2007 c1 8WhiteFlame-XIII
you need to improve the quality of the language mechnics first, before you post something. The lack of this causes any story to fall apart. find another beta reader.

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