
1/20/2008 c14
4Damascene
Excellent! You know if I haven't mentioned it yet I really liked the lockets that Will and Elizabeth had. That was a spiffy idea. ^^

Excellent! You know if I haven't mentioned it yet I really liked the lockets that Will and Elizabeth had. That was a spiffy idea. ^^
1/20/2008 c13 Damascene
Ooh, that was a little confusing, but I'm glad to see everything worked out. Now I really hope in the epi Solence and Ray will find their son!
Ooh, that was a little confusing, but I'm glad to see everything worked out. Now I really hope in the epi Solence and Ray will find their son!
1/19/2008 c12 Damascene
Nice chapter! I hope Will redeems himself soon... can't wait to see what Benny's up to, either. ^^
Nice chapter! I hope Will redeems himself soon... can't wait to see what Benny's up to, either. ^^
1/19/2008 c10 Damascene
Oh, jeez, Will is such a cad sometimes. Your use of Jack as comic relief in the midst of this mess is fantastic. The gadgets and shiny objects comment was enough to make me LOL a bit, because I can totally picture that whole scene happening. ^^
Oh, jeez, Will is such a cad sometimes. Your use of Jack as comic relief in the midst of this mess is fantastic. The gadgets and shiny objects comment was enough to make me LOL a bit, because I can totally picture that whole scene happening. ^^
1/19/2008 c9 Damascene
Oh my God... that's awful! Poor Solence. But LOL at Jack's desire for a flowerbed, and at Barbossa acting like a little kid whilst trying to get the charts.
Oh my God... that's awful! Poor Solence. But LOL at Jack's desire for a flowerbed, and at Barbossa acting like a little kid whilst trying to get the charts.
1/19/2008 c8 Damascene
Hey! Sorry I've been MIA on all of these new chapters. Classes. Homework. Trying to learn Spanish (I'm terrible at it).
I really liked this chapter! Hector, Jack, and Solence are hilarious together. And I hope someone is going to kill Beckett nice and slow... I'd better get reading to find out!
Hey! Sorry I've been MIA on all of these new chapters. Classes. Homework. Trying to learn Spanish (I'm terrible at it).
I really liked this chapter! Hector, Jack, and Solence are hilarious together. And I hope someone is going to kill Beckett nice and slow... I'd better get reading to find out!
1/4/2008 c7
4Damascene
I loved the previous chap; I could just see Will's jaw dropping at the breakfast and the floor being washed. ^^ But I like this chapter even more. I was wondering how Elizabeth could be aboard the Dutchman... now I want to know what happens to her from here. Well, and everyone else. Keep it up!

I loved the previous chap; I could just see Will's jaw dropping at the breakfast and the floor being washed. ^^ But I like this chapter even more. I was wondering how Elizabeth could be aboard the Dutchman... now I want to know what happens to her from here. Well, and everyone else. Keep it up!
12/29/2007 c4
4Damascene
You update at an almost alarming rate! Now then, poor Jack... I can't believe everyone's been betraying him. I also can't believe he stabbed a mouse. :'( Can't wait to read how this is all going to be resolved...!

You update at an almost alarming rate! Now then, poor Jack... I can't believe everyone's been betraying him. I also can't believe he stabbed a mouse. :'( Can't wait to read how this is all going to be resolved...!
12/29/2007 c3 Damascene
That was clever - killing the pig to call the Dutchman. I wouldn't have thought it would work. Personally I'd have offed a sailor... oops! ^^ I like this chapter as well. I can't wait to find out what's happening next...
That was clever - killing the pig to call the Dutchman. I wouldn't have thought it would work. Personally I'd have offed a sailor... oops! ^^ I like this chapter as well. I can't wait to find out what's happening next...
12/29/2007 c2 Damascene
The plot thickens... I can't believe Beckett is so horrid as to bargain with the life of a child! Wait - second thought, I can believe that of him. I like this chapter, but I have one little offering for criticism: if they're on a ship, it's the brig rather than a dungeon. ^^
The plot thickens... I can't believe Beckett is so horrid as to bargain with the life of a child! Wait - second thought, I can believe that of him. I like this chapter, but I have one little offering for criticism: if they're on a ship, it's the brig rather than a dungeon. ^^
12/28/2007 c1 Damascene
How are Jack and Hector going to get themselves (and Elizabeth and Will) out of this one? I await the second chapter... just a little constructive crit though - the dialogue could use a bit of tidying up, punctuationally speaking.
How are Jack and Hector going to get themselves (and Elizabeth and Will) out of this one? I await the second chapter... just a little constructive crit though - the dialogue could use a bit of tidying up, punctuationally speaking.