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1/20/2008 c14 4Damascene
Excellent! You know if I haven't mentioned it yet I really liked the lockets that Will and Elizabeth had. That was a spiffy idea. ^^
1/20/2008 c13 Damascene
Ooh, that was a little confusing, but I'm glad to see everything worked out. Now I really hope in the epi Solence and Ray will find their son!
1/19/2008 c12 Damascene
Nice chapter! I hope Will redeems himself soon... can't wait to see what Benny's up to, either. ^^
1/19/2008 c11 Damascene
Oh, I adore the miniature Jacks!
1/19/2008 c10 Damascene
Oh, jeez, Will is such a cad sometimes. Your use of Jack as comic relief in the midst of this mess is fantastic. The gadgets and shiny objects comment was enough to make me LOL a bit, because I can totally picture that whole scene happening. ^^
1/19/2008 c9 Damascene
Oh my God... that's awful! Poor Solence. But LOL at Jack's desire for a flowerbed, and at Barbossa acting like a little kid whilst trying to get the charts.
1/19/2008 c8 Damascene
Hey! Sorry I've been MIA on all of these new chapters. Classes. Homework. Trying to learn Spanish (I'm terrible at it).

I really liked this chapter! Hector, Jack, and Solence are hilarious together. And I hope someone is going to kill Beckett nice and slow... I'd better get reading to find out!
1/12/2008 c1 1HatHairJohnny
Nice job! Yay!
1/4/2008 c7 4Damascene
I loved the previous chap; I could just see Will's jaw dropping at the breakfast and the floor being washed. ^^ But I like this chapter even more. I was wondering how Elizabeth could be aboard the Dutchman... now I want to know what happens to her from here. Well, and everyone else. Keep it up!
12/30/2007 c5 Damascene
I like this longer chapter! Keep it up. ^^
12/30/2007 c5 192Wicked R
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12/29/2007 c4 4Damascene
You update at an almost alarming rate! Now then, poor Jack... I can't believe everyone's been betraying him. I also can't believe he stabbed a mouse. :'( Can't wait to read how this is all going to be resolved...!
12/29/2007 c3 Damascene
That was clever - killing the pig to call the Dutchman. I wouldn't have thought it would work. Personally I'd have offed a sailor... oops! ^^ I like this chapter as well. I can't wait to find out what's happening next...
12/29/2007 c2 Damascene
The plot thickens... I can't believe Beckett is so horrid as to bargain with the life of a child! Wait - second thought, I can believe that of him. I like this chapter, but I have one little offering for criticism: if they're on a ship, it's the brig rather than a dungeon. ^^
12/28/2007 c1 Damascene
How are Jack and Hector going to get themselves (and Elizabeth and Will) out of this one? I await the second chapter... just a little constructive crit though - the dialogue could use a bit of tidying up, punctuationally speaking.

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