for FAILED EXPERIMENT9/7/2009 c11 
1Dey'lih
I love this story. but i think you should work more with Kimberly. keep up the good work.
1Dey'lihI love this story. but i think you should work more with Kimberly. keep up the good work.
1/7/2008 c5 1Staarbit
This is pretty good, keep up the good work!
The only thing I suggest working on is the paragraphs. They're really hard to read when they're so long. But good job otherwise :)
1StaarbitThis is pretty good, keep up the good work!
The only thing I suggest working on is the paragraphs. They're really hard to read when they're so long. But good job otherwise :)
1/1/2008 c5 15Bardess of Avon
Whoa. Erm, I think some separation of paragraphs would help; I would at least be able to read it properly...
Don't take this the wrong way, but it's really, really hard to read when the paragraphs are all cramped like that.
15Bardess of AvonWhoa. Erm, I think some separation of paragraphs would help; I would at least be able to read it properly...
Don't take this the wrong way, but it's really, really hard to read when the paragraphs are all cramped like that.