for Jumper8/1/2008 c2 Fail the real squid
This is really good, I've always wanted to write a story like this, but never really got around to it.
I like the way she calls Chris Ocean-eyes.
I really hope you continue.
All the best.
This is really good, I've always wanted to write a story like this, but never really got around to it.
I like the way she calls Chris Ocean-eyes.
I really hope you continue.
All the best.
1/1/2008 c1 MushLover92
Well, cousin, I am excited to see where this story goes. I shall be reading it! and we need to keep more in touch this time. so maybe ill get on IM once in awhile. :)
~MushLover
Well, cousin, I am excited to see where this story goes. I shall be reading it! and we need to keep more in touch this time. so maybe ill get on IM once in awhile. :)
~MushLover
1/1/2008 c1 
3Grunge Sponge
I like it, there's a lot of mystery in it and that's cool. It's not bad! I love how drained you made the narration, it adds to the exhaustion of the character. Keep it up!
3Grunge SpongeI like it, there's a lot of mystery in it and that's cool. It's not bad! I love how drained you made the narration, it adds to the exhaustion of the character. Keep it up!