for When the Rain Began to Fall3/16/2008 c26 
11baby le
LOVED.IT. will's concern for her, even though they're at a "tentative" phase is overwhelming. and i love that he thinks she doesn't need him as much. she does, in fact. if not more. and, i'll say this...im definitely up for a change in rating. lols.great job!
11baby leLOVED.IT. will's concern for her, even though they're at a "tentative" phase is overwhelming. and i love that he thinks she doesn't need him as much. she does, in fact. if not more. and, i'll say this...im definitely up for a change in rating. lols.great job!
3/16/2008 c26 9Aquamarine07
Wow! That was really intense, but I liked it a lot! Especially the bit at the end, with Will realizing why Sao Feng wanted Elizabeth... that was very good. Update soon!
9Aquamarine07Wow! That was really intense, but I liked it a lot! Especially the bit at the end, with Will realizing why Sao Feng wanted Elizabeth... that was very good. Update soon!
3/15/2008 c25 11baby le
you've got will & liz down to a T. and i love the little touch of him carrying her to the hammocks. ugh...beautiful! i can't wait to hear will's thoughts when sao feng comes and takes her.
11baby leyou've got will & liz down to a T. and i love the little touch of him carrying her to the hammocks. ugh...beautiful! i can't wait to hear will's thoughts when sao feng comes and takes her.
3/15/2008 c25 9Aquamarine07
WO! MORE ANGST!
First of all, I love how you have Elizabeth react brokenly to Jack when she accidently grabs his boot. I think that Jack would have observed a change in both Will and Elizabeth since he was in the Locker, and I'm glad you made it a point to make that clear. These aren't the same cookie-cutter lovers that they were... its much more complicated and angsty now.
I also love how you write that Elizabeth has to trust herself before Will can trust her again. Thats a really good way of stating the broken link in their relationship that needs to be mended... I really love how you wrote that.
Great two chapters! As always, I'm loving the angst!
9Aquamarine07WO! MORE ANGST!
First of all, I love how you have Elizabeth react brokenly to Jack when she accidently grabs his boot. I think that Jack would have observed a change in both Will and Elizabeth since he was in the Locker, and I'm glad you made it a point to make that clear. These aren't the same cookie-cutter lovers that they were... its much more complicated and angsty now.
I also love how you write that Elizabeth has to trust herself before Will can trust her again. Thats a really good way of stating the broken link in their relationship that needs to be mended... I really love how you wrote that.
Great two chapters! As always, I'm loving the angst!
3/15/2008 c25 10QuidditchGirl30
Oh wonderful! And yay-new reviewers! Woo! Please update soon-I'm in suspense here! =P
QG30
10QuidditchGirl30Oh wonderful! And yay-new reviewers! Woo! Please update soon-I'm in suspense here! =P
QG30
3/14/2008 c24 11baby le
"trust" is my fave scene in AWE. you totally did this justice. the tension between them was perfect...and i loved how you pointed out that she looks to his lips subconsciously. great job! `=D
11baby le"trust" is my fave scene in AWE. you totally did this justice. the tension between them was perfect...and i loved how you pointed out that she looks to his lips subconsciously. great job! `=D
3/14/2008 c24 2Scuff the Newsgoil
Aw. Dude, I love you for writing this. Honestly. This is going on my favorites list right away. I love it. Keep up the great work!
Taylor ;)
2Scuff the NewsgoilAw. Dude, I love you for writing this. Honestly. This is going on my favorites list right away. I love it. Keep up the great work!
Taylor ;)
3/9/2008 c23 11baby le
there's that love/hate thing i have for you again. haha. i really wished the deleted scenes were on the DVD. but i loved how you integrated the deleted parts from the leaked script. very well done! `=D
11baby lethere's that love/hate thing i have for you again. haha. i really wished the deleted scenes were on the DVD. but i loved how you integrated the deleted parts from the leaked script. very well done! `=D
3/4/2008 c22 11baby le
i love & hate you right now b/c of all the damn tension.lols. but i do love this chap [much like the others]. it's like, "just kiss already!" lols. great job!
11baby lei love & hate you right now b/c of all the damn tension.lols. but i do love this chap [much like the others]. it's like, "just kiss already!" lols. great job!
3/4/2008 c22 10QuidditchGirl30
Honestly, I still cannot fathom why you don't have more reviews. Please don't be discouraged. This is fantastic. Please please please continue to update quickly! I'm waiting for the World's End "How can I trust you?" talk. Haha. Maybe within the next three chapters? *crosses fingers*
QG30
10QuidditchGirl30Honestly, I still cannot fathom why you don't have more reviews. Please don't be discouraged. This is fantastic. Please please please continue to update quickly! I'm waiting for the World's End "How can I trust you?" talk. Haha. Maybe within the next three chapters? *crosses fingers*
QG30