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7/7/2010 c1 11hogwartshobbiton
Aww... I hated that scene it was so sad but I loved it too because.. it was so sad xD And then Jack's line was just shattering and I can definitely see this being his thoughts. I love Sparrabeth like this :) Thankyou! xx
5/12/2010 c1 1Grabeccer
awww! Poor Jack and Elizabeth! Go away WILL! lol! I love the one-shot/drabble! (:
2/4/2009 c1 BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope
A great story. Very good.
2/5/2008 c1 Pretty Lil Pirate
That was so perfect! Loved it!
1/3/2008 c1 58Lobsters forever
Very sad and very sweet, but beautifully written.
1/2/2008 c1 1sweet-as-sugaruk
aw, so so sad =(

poor jack ( and lizzie ), nice tiny bit of writting there!
1/2/2008 c1 39Florencia7
Wonderful. Beautifully written, very touching.

I think that it was actually one of the best scenes in the movie.
1/1/2008 c1 whatnamebutnoname
aw.. poor Jackie...

cute little drabble, and yeah, that's what I think he thought too.
1/1/2008 c1 l'il pirate
*sniff* beautiful story.

I've always had a soft spot for Sparrowbeth stories, expecially little things like this. Very well done. I love it. I love Jack's feelings and how you wrote them.

very beautiful.
1/1/2008 c1 2beautiful-mistakez
So sad and beautiful!

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