for Shadows6/22/2008 c6 
3magickalfantasy
Yey! I'm glad youre back. I've been eager to see the next chapter of this story. Good job on it. Hope to see more!
3magickalfantasyYey! I'm glad youre back. I've been eager to see the next chapter of this story. Good job on it. Hope to see more!
6/22/2008 c6 Ginabella59
Waiting impatiently for more.
Please update soon and dont let waiting so long.
Waiting impatiently for more.
Please update soon and dont let waiting so long.
6/22/2008 c6 6BlackSparrow06
Oh wow!
Seriously, I hardly ever review (I know, bad person but I forget!) but I just had to say this is a wonderful story so far. I really got into it, so much so that I need to write this and urge you to update. Your story is so original and in character, it's hard to believe your story is a branch off.
Wonder-ific... Made that word up. x
6BlackSparrow06Oh wow!
Seriously, I hardly ever review (I know, bad person but I forget!) but I just had to say this is a wonderful story so far. I really got into it, so much so that I need to write this and urge you to update. Your story is so original and in character, it's hard to believe your story is a branch off.
Wonder-ific... Made that word up. x
4/9/2008 c5 Gabby
It sounds really good. I hope you can get the next chapter up soon!
It sounds really good. I hope you can get the next chapter up soon!
1/20/2008 c5 11CoffeeKris
o dark! I like it. I love it when Jareth decides to kick ass...actually I just plain love it when really attractive guys kick ass. Strike that, I just love really attractive guys. Yeah, accurate. :D
11CoffeeKriso dark! I like it. I love it when Jareth decides to kick ass...actually I just plain love it when really attractive guys kick ass. Strike that, I just love really attractive guys. Yeah, accurate. :D
1/19/2008 c5 65notwritten
Oh my gosh what a very interesting chapter you have wrote. Can you do more please and thank you. Keep smiling. :-)
65notwrittenOh my gosh what a very interesting chapter you have wrote. Can you do more please and thank you. Keep smiling. :-)
1/13/2008 c4 notwritten
What a nice chapter you have written today. Are you going to be updating soon, so that we can read more of this nice story. Have a nice day tomorrow, and keep smiling. :-)
What a nice chapter you have written today. Are you going to be updating soon, so that we can read more of this nice story. Have a nice day tomorrow, and keep smiling. :-)
1/3/2008 c3 MysticWolf71891
Wow, I really like this fiction, and you're so qick at updating! I added you to my alert list so I don't miss a thing. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Wow, I really like this fiction, and you're so qick at updating! I added you to my alert list so I don't miss a thing. Can't wait for the next chapter!
1/3/2008 c3 notwritten
This is a very cool chapter. It is very nice. Update please, do not let us wait long for the next chapter. Keep
smiling. :-)
This is a very cool chapter. It is very nice. Update please, do not let us wait long for the next chapter. Keep
smiling. :-)
1/3/2008 c3 2Zemmiphobia
Aww, Jareth isn't such a meanie after all! It's sweet that he wants to find her friend but does he have to keep beating her senseless to get his point across?
2ZemmiphobiaAww, Jareth isn't such a meanie after all! It's sweet that he wants to find her friend but does he have to keep beating her senseless to get his point across?
1/3/2008 c3 ShadowyLined
VERY interesting storyline! I'm intrigued and eager to see where you take this. However, I'd like to gently recommend that you employ the assistance of a beta reader. You have several spelling, grammatical and punctuation errors that, for me, at least, detract from this wonderful story. Otherwise, what an imagination you have! I await your next chapter...
VERY interesting storyline! I'm intrigued and eager to see where you take this. However, I'd like to gently recommend that you employ the assistance of a beta reader. You have several spelling, grammatical and punctuation errors that, for me, at least, detract from this wonderful story. Otherwise, what an imagination you have! I await your next chapter...