for The Choices We Make9/23/2008 c1 
3LadyShard
That was beautiful and honestly it wasn't until the second movie did I realize with grown up eyes how she had changed. This was a great story and I hope you'll continue to write more as I will surely be looking forward to reading them.
3LadyShardThat was beautiful and honestly it wasn't until the second movie did I realize with grown up eyes how she had changed. This was a great story and I hope you'll continue to write more as I will surely be looking forward to reading them.
1/6/2008 c1 1Fancy Friday
That was beautiful, very pensive, reflective and melancholic. Ariel's heartache with her lost connections with the sea and the dislocation from her childhood memories and her family is something the movie never really properly addressed and I feel it is something that was really quite central to the film. Well done, I would like to read more LM fictions from you, you have a good grasp of the movies and a nice turn of phrase.
1Fancy FridayThat was beautiful, very pensive, reflective and melancholic. Ariel's heartache with her lost connections with the sea and the dislocation from her childhood memories and her family is something the movie never really properly addressed and I feel it is something that was really quite central to the film. Well done, I would like to read more LM fictions from you, you have a good grasp of the movies and a nice turn of phrase.