for The Tennis Legend5/2/2016 c2 kayz
plsss continue this!
plsss continue this!
5/25/2014 c2 Guest
Moooooore¡!
Moooooore¡!
7/1/2013 c2 sakura
come on how can you make the readers wait so long,I love this fic and eagerly await the next chapter!
come on how can you make the readers wait so long,I love this fic and eagerly await the next chapter!
7/1/2013 c1 sakura
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAA.*coughs*,Wonderfully interesting,do continue this fic!
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAA.*coughs*,Wonderfully interesting,do continue this fic!
2/28/2011 c2 tezukafujiyromalover
HELLOOO! YOUR STORY IS CUTE, FUNNY AND NICE... SO I'M GIVING U A THUMBS UP... HEEHEH... CONTINUE THIS ONE COZ' ITS REELLY REALLY NICE...
AND ALSO, PLEASE MAKE SOME TEZUSAKU PARINGS PLEASE,,, ARIGATOU GOZAIMASHITA... JA NE...
HELLOOO! YOUR STORY IS CUTE, FUNNY AND NICE... SO I'M GIVING U A THUMBS UP... HEEHEH... CONTINUE THIS ONE COZ' ITS REELLY REALLY NICE...
AND ALSO, PLEASE MAKE SOME TEZUSAKU PARINGS PLEASE,,, ARIGATOU GOZAIMASHITA... JA NE...
4/26/2008 c2 SnowCharms
I wonder if he is Nanjiroh's teammate...but i thought that only Nanjiroh won in d match? This will be interesting...but she should train more so that she can actually meet Ryoma's expectations...update!
I wonder if he is Nanjiroh's teammate...but i thought that only Nanjiroh won in d match? This will be interesting...but she should train more so that she can actually meet Ryoma's expectations...update!
2/27/2008 c2 
3Anzu29214
I seriously love this movie. Please update I don't see any stories like this. Rock on!^^
3Anzu29214I seriously love this movie. Please update I don't see any stories like this. Rock on!^^
1/23/2008 c2 5Bluementrit
update
it's great
love
it
could it be that oshiteru-san is najirou-san's mortal opponent?
update
5Bluementritupdate
it's great
love
it
could it be that oshiteru-san is najirou-san's mortal opponent?
update
1/20/2008 c2 3EvilFaerie17
I like this story so far. It could use a little work in the word phrasing department, for small things that don't make sense, but other than that small detail, it's really good. Like, for example, *“Sakuno, why did you form that same smirk that Ryoma-sama had?”* It should be changed to something like, *"Sakuno, why did you smirk just like Ryoma-sama?"* or something to that effect. It's concise, and it makes more sense. Another one is, *“That way leads to the teacher’s faculty…”* Instead of leaving it off as teacher's faculty, add the word 'room' after them. Saying you're going to the teacher's faculty, to me, doesn't make much sense because faculty implies actual people, whereas you're trying to say they are going to the faculty room. Make sense? I hope I'm not coming off as mean or anything, I'm not trying to be. ^_^
The plot line is very interesting. Is everyone going to figure out that she's a vessel for Shigeru? What will their reactions be? I can't wait to find out! So please update as soon as you can!
ttfn!
EvilFaerie17
3EvilFaerie17I like this story so far. It could use a little work in the word phrasing department, for small things that don't make sense, but other than that small detail, it's really good. Like, for example, *“Sakuno, why did you form that same smirk that Ryoma-sama had?”* It should be changed to something like, *"Sakuno, why did you smirk just like Ryoma-sama?"* or something to that effect. It's concise, and it makes more sense. Another one is, *“That way leads to the teacher’s faculty…”* Instead of leaving it off as teacher's faculty, add the word 'room' after them. Saying you're going to the teacher's faculty, to me, doesn't make much sense because faculty implies actual people, whereas you're trying to say they are going to the faculty room. Make sense? I hope I'm not coming off as mean or anything, I'm not trying to be. ^_^
The plot line is very interesting. Is everyone going to figure out that she's a vessel for Shigeru? What will their reactions be? I can't wait to find out! So please update as soon as you can!
ttfn!
EvilFaerie17