for Midnight's Curse5/18/2012 c20 Guest
If ya update u will be hearing more from me!
:)))))
If ya update u will be hearing more from me!
:)))))
12/12/2009 c3 lydd
i love it! 3
i love it! 3
5/19/2009 c20 HWW
I look foward to reading the new chapters, I'm surprised, but glad you are going to re-write the story, and that you just didnt give up. Please dont take long, but dont over work yourself :)
I look foward to reading the new chapters, I'm surprised, but glad you are going to re-write the story, and that you just didnt give up. Please dont take long, but dont over work yourself :)
8/3/2008 c19 
19lightpathetic
O! Kumara sounds more interesting than his brother. Could she run off with him?
Nice chapter. I loved the action and the thought of someone evaporating an entire lake just to apprehend a small wolf. I like this guy...
LP
19lightpatheticO! Kumara sounds more interesting than his brother. Could she run off with him?
Nice chapter. I loved the action and the thought of someone evaporating an entire lake just to apprehend a small wolf. I like this guy...
LP
8/3/2008 c18 lightpathetic
That's a handy rose for you - teleportation. Nice.
(A part of me hopes she bites Kage.)
I wonder what's the threat?
LP
That's a handy rose for you - teleportation. Nice.
(A part of me hopes she bites Kage.)
I wonder what's the threat?
LP
8/3/2008 c17 lightpathetic
Nope. Kage hasn't won back my heart. Could have set the poor girl straight...
LP
Nope. Kage hasn't won back my heart. Could have set the poor girl straight...
LP
8/3/2008 c15 lightpathetic
LOL. Aglaia was funny but Kage still needs a backbone.
*Disappointed there was no slap*
LP
LOL. Aglaia was funny but Kage still needs a backbone.
*Disappointed there was no slap*
LP
8/3/2008 c14 lightpathetic
I admit I started out liking Aglaia as a villain. Then... Miyako didn't even put up resistance to being ordered around rudely by this witch and Kage didn't stop her from mistreating Miyako, considering it was someone he was putting up with for his own reasons. Very disappointing. Aglaia comes off as a bully over much weaker people and she lost my love. *sigh*
Here's hoping either Miyako or Kage at least smacks her in the near future - I prefer Miyako.
LP
I admit I started out liking Aglaia as a villain. Then... Miyako didn't even put up resistance to being ordered around rudely by this witch and Kage didn't stop her from mistreating Miyako, considering it was someone he was putting up with for his own reasons. Very disappointing. Aglaia comes off as a bully over much weaker people and she lost my love. *sigh*
Here's hoping either Miyako or Kage at least smacks her in the near future - I prefer Miyako.
LP
8/3/2008 c13 lightpathetic
LOL. I love when fiancees pop out of the woodwork to stunned male counterparts. *Still laughing*.
I loved the pace of this chapter. Although I am wondering if they will ever leave the castle...
Typos. I didn't want to mention them because... well... you know... but if you see them you should correct them. Sometimes they pull you out the story.
Me: "'Atmosphere chance'? What? What's that? ... Oh 'CHANGE'. Okay."
Loving it so far.
LP
LOL. I love when fiancees pop out of the woodwork to stunned male counterparts. *Still laughing*.
I loved the pace of this chapter. Although I am wondering if they will ever leave the castle...
Typos. I didn't want to mention them because... well... you know... but if you see them you should correct them. Sometimes they pull you out the story.
Me: "'Atmosphere chance'? What? What's that? ... Oh 'CHANGE'. Okay."
Loving it so far.
LP
8/3/2008 c11 lightpathetic
She thinks the assassin is back so she throws a FLUFFY, PINK pillow...
Good for Kage, bad for my nerves.
LP
She thinks the assassin is back so she throws a FLUFFY, PINK pillow...
Good for Kage, bad for my nerves.
LP
8/3/2008 c10 lightpathetic
Loved the action. Kage's weapon is so cool. I laughed when the dragon thumped the assassin on the back of the head and disappeared when commanded to knock him out. My kind of dragon! No mystical spells for him!
The plot seems to be thickening nicely. I wonder what Kage has in store for his evil brother (and the assassin. I liked the spell on him too.)
LP
Loved the action. Kage's weapon is so cool. I laughed when the dragon thumped the assassin on the back of the head and disappeared when commanded to knock him out. My kind of dragon! No mystical spells for him!
The plot seems to be thickening nicely. I wonder what Kage has in store for his evil brother (and the assassin. I liked the spell on him too.)
LP
7/30/2008 c5 Elle
why would you post this if its going to e published? you're losing money
why would you post this if its going to e published? you're losing money