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7/6/2009 c23 ravenaurelius
fantastic story
6/23/2009 c23 Slytherin66
Good chapter but I hope Haeden starts to rely on his family soon, the I want to be alone brooding can get very tiresome. I ask this often but please teach Granger a lesson she is so very annoying, it would be a nice thing to do for Haeden if someone were to spell the common room from red to green and blame the Slytherin’s as a prank. I look forward to the next chapter, Thanks.
6/21/2009 c23 6ams71080
Great chapter.

Amber
6/21/2009 c23 1Flying Chrissy
An interesting take on this. Looking forward to the next update!
6/21/2009 c23 5Fireboltpatronus21818
I like the universe :) hopefully we'll here more about the little boy in Slytherin XD
6/20/2009 c23 1Potter Abducted by Penguins
Interesting story thus far. I do wish that Harry/Haeden would be more crafty in his dealings with Dumbledork, Ron and Hermione. There MUST be some way he can get Hermione off his back at least. I'm also hoping that you have some plans to at least have both Severus and Haeden expose Dumbledork for the manipulative buzzard he really is.

I like Selene. You should make it more possible for both she and Haeden to associate with each other regardless of what Hermione thinks. Hermione should be made to leave Haeden alone and mind her own business!

It might also be good for Harry/Haeden to just tell Ron and Hermione to just go to Hell, and make Dumbledore PAY for what he has done to him.
6/20/2009 c23 Stunna21
good chapter so update soon and keep writing its great.
6/20/2009 c23 attyfan
Very good - Selene will help Haeden a lot. Can't wait until Dumbledore gets what is due to him.
6/3/2009 c21 9Lord Lugos
I'm thoroughly enjoying this story, at first I thought that Ginny was Lin, in hiding, then I thought Luna was the mysterious one in the common room, as she is clearly a clandestine, but duh, Ginny is Airu, gonna keep an eye out. But how, that's the real story. Adopted? More probably kidnapped and placed with the Weasleys by Dumbles, with another mind rape on Arthur and Molly. Or could be something else. Can't wait to find out. :)
5/3/2009 c22 slashslut
love, love, LOVE this fic! god, hermione is the pits. blech. can't wait for the next update!
5/2/2009 c22 1NZcalling
This is really amazing - I love it and can't wait for the next chapter!
4/29/2009 c22 Slytherin66
Very good chapter, the father/son relationship is progressing which is very good as Severus would be an outstanding father in my opinion and a good friend. It was a nice touch that Severus was most upset at the failed potion, the man truly loves his art. I hope Haeden is not going to be a prat with regard to Draco and his sister as she needs powerful friends to fit in. It would be nice if Granger gets sick from not eating or if the house elfs poison her for her attitude towards them. I look forward to future chapters of this most outstanding story and most enjoyable read.
4/21/2009 c22 6ams71080
I enjoyed it.

Amber
4/21/2009 c22 42somethingjustlikethat
WOW! Totally smashing story you've got there! I can't wait for the next chapter! The way you managed to change the total plot to that of Dumbledore being the bad guy and the Dark Lord being the good guy is really good! In fact, the amount of effort you have put into this story is clearly shown!:)

Excellent job!
4/18/2009 c22 1Lady Lupine
Excellent story so far. I love the way your characters are written. They are well developed and very realistic. The dialogue is fantastic and I can't wait to see where you are going with this. Though I was confused a bit in the beginning about some of your OC's, I think I am starting to get the hang of it :D I hope you post a new chapter soon!
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