for Ordinary Day9/26/2008 c5 
2MustangTaisaNoKoibito
Ouch, how could Miroku do that? I guess now there will be no guilt for Rin if she leaves him for Sesshomaru huh? Well you have good spelling and I hope to read your next chapter soon. =3
2MustangTaisaNoKoibitoOuch, how could Miroku do that? I guess now there will be no guilt for Rin if she leaves him for Sesshomaru huh? Well you have good spelling and I hope to read your next chapter soon. =3
9/26/2008 c5 Taraah36
im quite surprised that sesshomaru even let miroku get away but then again i guess his concern was mainly on her im so glad they finally got together and the bet the sex was unreal i mean hey he's a demon y the hell NOT lol i can't wait until the next chapter update soon ... p.s. im still wonderin about the tattoo i wonder if its always been rin and i wonder if she's gonna be tracin his arm when she wakes up and find it
im quite surprised that sesshomaru even let miroku get away but then again i guess his concern was mainly on her im so glad they finally got together and the bet the sex was unreal i mean hey he's a demon y the hell NOT lol i can't wait until the next chapter update soon ... p.s. im still wonderin about the tattoo i wonder if its always been rin and i wonder if she's gonna be tracin his arm when she wakes up and find it
8/24/2008 c4 Taraah36
uh oh what happend man i wanna know i wanna know (jumps up and down and screams like a child kickin and screaming) ok im done lol anyway update soon tootles
uh oh what happend man i wanna know i wanna know (jumps up and down and screams like a child kickin and screaming) ok im done lol anyway update soon tootles
8/23/2008 c3 Taraah36
wow talk about a steamy chapter .. hmm i wonder if thats who rin lost her virginity too since at the beginning of the story it was a topic of discussion i hope you do a flashback scene because iwant to know exactly what happend between them the last time they were together update soon
wow talk about a steamy chapter .. hmm i wonder if thats who rin lost her virginity too since at the beginning of the story it was a topic of discussion i hope you do a flashback scene because iwant to know exactly what happend between them the last time they were together update soon
8/16/2008 c2 Taraah36
wow talk about a straight sex chapter lol i liked it i just can't wait until she meets up with sessh and the rest of them in paris wow talk about excited like im really in the story .. anyway i just wanna say that rin won't be doin it 3 n 4 times a day if she gets with sessh im sorry but he just seems like he will lay it on her and she will be knocked out for quite some time lol anyway update soon i wanna know what happens next ... until next time
CIAO
wow talk about a straight sex chapter lol i liked it i just can't wait until she meets up with sessh and the rest of them in paris wow talk about excited like im really in the story .. anyway i just wanna say that rin won't be doin it 3 n 4 times a day if she gets with sessh im sorry but he just seems like he will lay it on her and she will be knocked out for quite some time lol anyway update soon i wanna know what happens next ... until next time
CIAO
1/6/2008 c1 Krazi3-AnimeLover
umm nice keep it coming and could you space out your dialogue from everything else?it would make it easier to read!
umm nice keep it coming and could you space out your dialogue from everything else?it would make it easier to read!
1/6/2008 c1 21AWiltedRoseSighs
Cant wait to read the rest, sounds really good. There is going to be more isn't there?
21AWiltedRoseSighsCant wait to read the rest, sounds really good. There is going to be more isn't there?