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11/12/2016 c2 ghost
hi, would have been great without the crossover. I wish you had just written saint Seiya
9/17/2008 c5 1Unmei Bara
Nice story~ Hope you update soon~
1/16/2008 c1 3piyasayo
This look really interesting... I belive is in your plans include what happens to Nike in this story together with the other OCs and leading characters.

keep working, and i give you my support with your writer's block, im suffering one too T-T
1/14/2008 c2 Windfiar
BLARGH! Now I'm all interested in who the hell Nike is and why all are so...secretive about her.
1/13/2008 c1 Windfiar
This sounds like it will build to something really worth the read. It's already grabbed me.

A little advice though, your "old" speak is a bit off...for example, the line:

"Who is thy? What does thy wish to know?" she asked.

Should be written like: "Who art thou? What does thou wish to know"

Or: "Thy will wait here. Thy will know,"

Should be: "Thou will wait here. Thou shalt know,"

I'm pretty good with translating "old" speak, so if you're ever unsure, just PM the story to me and I can touch those parts up. But other than that, flawless ^_^.

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