for Loonatics In Love11/24/2020 c2 gorilla blazers
Please don't ever forget about me gorilla blazers. BTW keep up the good work & no male to male love stories pretty please.
Please don't ever forget about me gorilla blazers. BTW keep up the good work & no male to male love stories pretty please.
11/24/2020 c1 gorilla blazers
Great beginning.
Great beginning.
7/6/2018 c1 red
Also if you are going to finsh it don't have anyone almost die.
Also if you are going to finsh it don't have anyone almost die.
7/6/2018 c1 red
I think it was awesome! My fav was Techna, who sounds like what I am in real life.
I think it was awesome! My fav was Techna, who sounds like what I am in real life.
10/21/2013 c2 Guest
finish it it sounds interesting
finish it it sounds interesting
5/25/2013 c1 
5Remedy's Melody
hey tht was pretty good
i just wish it went longer on to find out how each one of them fell in love ya no
5Remedy's Melodyhey tht was pretty good
i just wish it went longer on to find out how each one of them fell in love ya no
6/10/2012 c2 9Dream Dragoness
Got your note and I've signed and updated it onto my 2 M-rated fics. If they say 'nay' to M-rated fics, then not only are they losing valuable readers, but they are also denying our freedoms of speech and expression.
9Dream DragonessGot your note and I've signed and updated it onto my 2 M-rated fics. If they say 'nay' to M-rated fics, then not only are they losing valuable readers, but they are also denying our freedoms of speech and expression.
8/22/2011 c1 the monkey princess
I like it. Please make another chapter!
I like it. Please make another chapter!
7/14/2008 c1 12DaAmazingMeepers
Not bad. I prefer my fanfics in story form rather than script form, but hey, whatever floats your boat. More soon please!:3
12DaAmazingMeepersNot bad. I prefer my fanfics in story form rather than script form, but hey, whatever floats your boat. More soon please!:3
5/31/2008 c1 9cartoonartist
You haven't been watching Avatar the last airbender have you?
It just occurred to me that Bloodbending is in Avatar, the last time I put that in a story it was considered as copyrighted and my story was deleted.
But then again, that might be an internet flaw, don't worry.
I like how you introduced the characters though in my opinion, it's not good to introduce so many characters like that, it kinda confuses people. But you Original Characters have personalities and they're definitely not Mary Sues and that's a change, I keep seeing Mary Sues everywhere.
I love the pairings, all of them and I think this story is very interesting. Keep up the good work and work on your characters because it's not everyday you see good characters like them! Love to see your next chapter, update soon!
9cartoonartistYou haven't been watching Avatar the last airbender have you?
It just occurred to me that Bloodbending is in Avatar, the last time I put that in a story it was considered as copyrighted and my story was deleted.
But then again, that might be an internet flaw, don't worry.
I like how you introduced the characters though in my opinion, it's not good to introduce so many characters like that, it kinda confuses people. But you Original Characters have personalities and they're definitely not Mary Sues and that's a change, I keep seeing Mary Sues everywhere.
I love the pairings, all of them and I think this story is very interesting. Keep up the good work and work on your characters because it's not everyday you see good characters like them! Love to see your next chapter, update soon!
2/2/2008 c1 11lugia flyhight
interesting plot young one.
though one is not keen with the use of script language when using speech, this is not a script performance but from what yee have written a story. However thy do understand if it is easier to have conversation than by all means do it. But in a matter of thine opinion please use speech with "-"
Yee story has some charm and from what thy can forsee a interesting fic.
11lugia flyhightinteresting plot young one.
though one is not keen with the use of script language when using speech, this is not a script performance but from what yee have written a story. However thy do understand if it is easier to have conversation than by all means do it. But in a matter of thine opinion please use speech with "-"
Yee story has some charm and from what thy can forsee a interesting fic.
1/12/2008 c1 Baeden
It's reall good! Keep going. Oh a little FYI. Lexi has 3 powers, her hearing, her brain blast AND her plant controlly thingy.
It's reall good! Keep going. Oh a little FYI. Lexi has 3 powers, her hearing, her brain blast AND her plant controlly thingy.
1/8/2008 c1 9bellechat
Well, since you've reviewed my LT story I decided to do the same for you. I like this a lot! I do love the pairing Lexi and Danger, but this looks interesting. I like how the characters have different colors and powers, yet have similarities to the guys. I like Raychel and Techna's personalities the most. Update soon please! :)
9bellechatWell, since you've reviewed my LT story I decided to do the same for you. I like this a lot! I do love the pairing Lexi and Danger, but this looks interesting. I like how the characters have different colors and powers, yet have similarities to the guys. I like Raychel and Techna's personalities the most. Update soon please! :)