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2/20/2009 c2 KennyWinker
love it!
2/20/2009 c10 1Van der Ay
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I do not usually spam like this but I like your story. Naru/Tayuya are really interesting when done good. Please update more - if you do, you'll get more recognition and can be included more c2s which will make you and everybody else happy. It's like a spiral of happiness. Don't make me sad by not updating early.

Write a vague storyline and then use it to prevent writer's block. OK?

plox update soon

-van der ay
2/20/2009 c10 demon1990
very good story cant wait for more...really i cant. update soon or the bunny well die *holds a pistol to a rabbits head
2/20/2009 c10 Lazielow
Good story so far ! Please hurry up with next chapter. XD
2/20/2009 c10 8DrendeSalkash
Hideo's a good character. Even though he's ANBU i believe he still did too well against Tobi. He wouldn't have given him an oportunity to even breath after learning he's an Uchiha, but that's opinion right? anyways, good chapter, and if possible, more Hideo. even if it's just in flashbacks
2/20/2009 c10 FamousFox89 aka the black Crow
Yeah, your evil...to an extend at least. Hope you go on soon (My soon, not your two month soon...)

Your dear reader

FF89atbC
2/19/2009 c10 Raptor2001
i already read 10 chapter .. it is very intesteseting ... i wonder Naruto will keep nindo from Hideo ... good thing you make OC limited because

most fanfic make much mnay OC ... it will confused around readers
2/19/2009 c10 Grendal
No doubt, that was a much better fight scene than last time. This was a very good and very emotional chapter and I have to say I like how it turned out(except the damn cliffy ;P). Hideo Onji is definitely one of the most likable OC's that I have ever read about and I have literally read THOUSANDS of fan fictions to this date(maby even tes of...). Please don't kill him off. It would feel like Jiraiya or Tsunade dying and I would hate that feeling. I was bad enough in canon when Tayuya -the ONLY likable member of the Sound Four- was killed just for convenience because KishiMOFO didn't want to have to think up a back ground and continued plot line for her; much to the great ire of the entire fandom populous. There is still a lot of untapped literary use for him with at least five main characters, not including Naruto and Tayuya. So on the subject of his survival I vote(nay demand=D)an emphatic yes. As for Naruto and Tayuya, that was a nice and quite touching scene at the end of the chapter! Good job!It could have used a little refining but was still quite enjoyable, so thanks for the effort that you have obviously put into all of this. After the -censored- day I have had this was a pleasant surprise to come home and find. The only thing that was really lacking was Bee's participation in the fight. I mean he beat the hell out of Sasuke and his little team single-handedly in the manga before he went Biju on them but didn't on Tobi. Don't get me wrong. The fight was good and it ended like what I felt it should have so this ain't a flame, but Bee should have been more useful is all. You probably could have gotten two or three thousand more words out of it. Still, it was a flashback scene so I guess it's not that important. Once again, Great Job on another great chapter and I look forward to the next installment of Changing Tune.

Bye bye,

Grendal
2/19/2009 c10 HyuugaPrincess15
please please dont kill him that would suck
2/19/2009 c10 sandaime23
Good chapter, I don't really have anything to say, can't wait for the next update.
2/19/2009 c10 Sweaty Gym Socks
"Someone kidnap that stilldeluded guy already. And while your at it, make him tell you what will happen in the rest of the story so you can just pass that information on to us. Then break his ankles with a sledgehammer.(Good movie)"

Hint Hint.

(Only Kidding)

Your readers won't go all Misery on you if the next chapter contains:

1)No character death. (I actually liked Hideo Onji. That was a lie, I didn't not like him. I'd rather see him unable to continue his career as a ninja than dead. Leaving Tayuya without a ninja sitter... It's your story.)

2)A nice little Naruto-Tayuya moment. (Fluff =D )

There is no 3.

I'll be here until the story is complete, no matter how long it takes.
2/19/2009 c10 7The-Eighth-Sin
Nice chap, you cliffhanging sonofbitch.
2/19/2009 c10 jdtwins2009
I knew to not expect an "EPIC" fight, but I thought this one played out pretty well, and I have no complaints with it. Point in fact, Hideo was up against Madara, so the amount of damage he got in was actually EPIC. LOL

Anyways, I'm liking the couple development. I expect many a great things from this story, so...KEEP THE CHAPTERS GOING DAMMIT!
2/17/2009 c1 jdtwins2009
Update the story already, dammit!
2/9/2009 c7 iamnuff
naruto passed out from just that... you made him a real wimp

he only got hit once
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